Hi Srishti,
-You have gone very shortcut…there is only one points which recognizes that it goes against the basic tenets of the constitution…that is the religious recognition…however, there are various other factors which also shows violation of constitutional principles…Please do mention more…
-Your answer lacks 360 degree approach…
Though good…you have good content and well understanding regarding the topic…the need is to mention all the dimensions required to complete the answer…
Keep writing…

Marks awarded: 3/10

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Hi Satvik,
-In simple sense the answer is good…though it can be more better if you would have brought more wider ideas…
-The example of Tukaram is good one…but it is the duty of police personnels to protect us…being martyr for every case will not hold the pragmatic approach…He got martyr that is the sad part of story…here you can compare the good work of labour and corrupt work of officials/leaders etc…
-Police job is always prestigious…however, the bribe, irresponsible behaviour etc…etc…does not change the nature of job rather the perception of people gets changed…so the service does not becomes negative…(1st para of 2nd page)…
-Though good approach…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4/10

Hi Shefali,
-Very good answer…ideas are well presented with beautiful arrangement of points…
-However, if you could be able to make conclusion more holistic one, by mixing the ideas of first part with that of 2nd part i.e. various reasons of landslides with that of more frequent land slides on Himalayas…will add three star in answer…

-Though good attempt…well written…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7.5/15

Hi GK,
-Introduction seems poor…the demand of the question is what are landslides…you have explained the reason in intro…(focus on question)…
-More micro analysis of indogenic as well as exogenic factors needed…we can also depict them with diagram…
-2nd page…the construction of dams is not the grave reason…rather, snow picked, sliding down of huge glaciers, siltation in himalayan rivers, continuous flow of water annually etc…

-The logical arrangement of ideas needed…first mention about the internal forces…then external forces,,,,then human activities…mixing all together will make presentation poor…

-Ideas in the points are good…need to arrange them logically…
Overall, good attempt…need to focus more on the question with micro views…keep writing will improve for sure…

Marks awarded: 4.5/15

Hi GK,
-There is repeatition of the same idea of question in first line of intro…rather, we should talk about the how (bringing reasons) Climate change is a global threat and how it affects the socio-economic conditions of people…
-Point 1…its monsoonal rainfall…El Nino, La Nina have different context through related to the Climate change…need to mention separately…will give one new and good point…Neither of the ideas are complete here…
-Under measures…the first point is for generating more income to farmers…its not supporting the point of climate change…2nd point is also for same…
-Points under measures are too general…and mixed up…
-conclusion is okay…okay…

Overall, such attempt is considered an average one…need to have more focus in question with more micro points to incorporate in answer…
-Though, your attempt is good…keep writing…will improve for sure…

Marks awarded: 4/15

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