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Hello Sandeep…
-Introduction is very poor…as the quote mentioned is not complete in itself…it certainly has different context…
-The reason mentioned are too poor…we need to explain in order to justify the points…
-Under heading…steps to motivate…these points too lack proper justification…
-Conclusion is a bit okay…okay…
Overall an below average answer…may certainly improve further
Keep writing…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Hi Sandeep…
-Need to work on language…avoid the points which are not relevant…drafting committee opinion etc…
-The provision mentioned U/A 239 AA is certainly not correct…refer our model answer for better clarity…
-The provision of Art 239AA gives all the powers to state mentioned under state list but…except three…law and order, police and land…
However, the controversy is more about interference in appointment, transfer and posting of any office working in Delhi by central government….
-The points mentioned are very general…under how it deprived…the last two points under the same heading seems immature comment…and certainly need justification…
-Conclusion also presents half picture…talk about giving full statehood, independent power to elected govt. of Delhi…as they are the mandate of citizens…
overall the answer is between below average and average one…
Need more clarity with concept and ideas as well…keep writing…
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