31st October 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

What is the Indian Ocean Dipole? Explain its connection with the Indian monsoons

Question 2)

The fourth industrial revolution will be based on artificial intelligence which in turn depends on ‘data’. What are the factors affecting the location of AI industry globally? Where does India stand in this context?

Question 3)

INF Treaty has been one of the major missile control treaty between Washington and Moscow which also has significant contribution to end the cold war. Analyse the pros and cons of United Nations withdrawal from INF Treaty.

Question 4)

What is ‘justice’? What are its different kinds?

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Sandeep Goyal
Sandeep Goyal
6 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
6 years ago
Reply to  Sandeep Goyal

Hi Sandeep…
-Introduction is poor…justice certainly is not only fairness…its wider in context…Justice is the legal or philosophical theory by which fairness is administered….to individual being…group…or society…etc.
-Social, economical, political justice are the example…the main type being procedural v/s substantive, retributive, reformative, distributive etc…
-Your answer is too general and a below average one….not fulfilling the proper demand of the question…You need to have more conceptual clarity regarding the topic…think in more micro perspective…
-However well attempted…will improve further…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 2.5/10

Sandeep Goyal
Sandeep Goyal
6 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
6 years ago
Reply to  Sandeep Goyal

Hi Sandeep…
-Good points…however, your intro seems to be too long…first 3 para talks about the introduction only…
-India is not only lacking in R & D but in many respects…like…India lacks data collection in comparison to other developing countries which is the prime raw material for this…absence of big technological industries, Use of AI in India is considered low priorities as operational cost here is low…absence of market…etc…etc…etc…
-Add more points in India’s stand….
-Under India’s effort…you have not mentioned about India’s data collection efforts, efforts in IoT etc…etc…
Overall your answer is an average one…need more specificity…

However well attempted…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 3/10

Sandeep Goyal
Sandeep Goyal
6 years ago

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Pritam Kumar
6 years ago
Reply to  Sandeep Goyal

Hello Sandeep Goyal….
-Introduction is good…however, it is a phenomena more similar to ENSO than EL-NINO…
-Why it occurs…This point need more clarification…
-The points are not explaining the complete picture…though diagram is okay…need to bring more clarification in points…like it has been witnessed that positive IOD index often negated the effect of ENSO, resulting in increased Monsoon rains in ENSO year in central India….
However, your attempt is good…but the points convey incomplete idea…an below average answer…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer….

Marks awarded: 2.5/10

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