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CDTEST22496 Ans 4
Hi Lekha,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…
-Form small para…reading long para is like forgetting the previous things and moving ahead without any direction…its more of confusing…and hence will fetch marks accordingly…
-You have acceded the word limit as well…please pay attention to it…
-Introductory para seems good…however, its long and need to sync it…
-The points are good with well mentioned ideas…
Overall, the answer is good content wise…need to improve format and structure of answer…
Keep writing..
Marks awarded: 6/12
CDTEST22496 Ans 2
Hi Lekha,
-The answer is excellent…and very impressive…
Points are precisely written and well arranged ideas…Nice approach…
Good going…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 8/12.5
(This is the highest marks I ever awarded to any answer.) WELL DONE
Thank you Sir 🙂
CDTEST22496 Ans 3
Hi Lekha,
Answer seems to be very good and precisely written…
-Introduction is very impressive…
-Points under challenges are also very well written…
-Recommendation…short term as well as long term are good…You seems to be covering all the aspects regarding topic…nice approach…however, please pay attention to the word limit…
-Conclusion is beautiful…
Overall, good attempt…precisely written points and well arranged ideas…good one …keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/12.5
CDTEST22496 Ans 1
Hi Lekha,
-Introduction is very good…
-However, under domestic influence…unifying factors are somewhat good…but the other two points i.e. international boundaries, import/export etc. does not suit to the logic of geographical influences…These points might need more clarity or further elaboration…
-Points under regional factors as well as internal influence are good…and well written…
-Overall, good attempt…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6.5/15
ID : CDTEST22699
ANS:1
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Hi Rohit,
-Kindly post answers separately one by one…reviewing separately makes easy for us…as well as for you to evaluate the performance…
01
-First of all, Politics is not the sister discipline of geography…so abstain yourself from furnishing wrong info…
-Poor introduction…no concrete and logical ideas have been brought here…Geography influences the living condition of people, livelihood, economy, market system, food habit, crops growing and subsequently administration…administration is governed by politics and are also vice versa…
-Ideas brought under classification are very general…
Geographical factors influences the political decisions like special category status to hilly state of north and north-east, tribal areas and forest cover areas gets special administration, crops grown depends on the soil, water, surrounding environment, river interlinking etc…
Overall, the answer seems to be an average one…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 3.5/15
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
02
-Your answer seems to be okay…however, you have missed some of the key points…we need to mention why there has been sour in relationship between both the countries…mention separately the issues for Nepal and India…
After mentioning the bone of contention, suggest some steps (the “other steps include” mentioned by you is good and can be placed here…)
-Overall, structure wise the answer seems to be good…need to improve in content by mentioning all the aspects…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4/10
03
-There is no introduction and conclusion in answer…
-However, reasons of ineffectiveness and consequences are good…
-More points can be added under suitable measures…
Good approach…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5/12.5
04
-Good answer…points are precise and well arranged…good one…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5.5/12.5
CDTEST22530
3rd Jan 2019
Ans 4:
Hi Tabassum,
-Arrange your answer is 3, 4, 5 paragraphs…avoid forming long paragraph…
-Intro seems okay…2nd para also seems okay…and the ideas here is also good…though example needed to support and clarify the points…
Widely shared values are good to maintain cohesion in society however sometimes such widely shared values gets so prevailed that it becomes the norms of society despite being morally wrong…for example Dowry system, child marriage… etc…
-Though good attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4.5/12.5
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CDTEST22530
3rd Jan 2019
Ans 3:
Hi Tabassum,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…ensure that one line should not contain more than 5-6 words.
-Some words of lines are hidden on margin…hence difficulties in deciphering…though reviewing…
-Introduction seems okay…
-Points under inefficiency seems good…however, more need to be incorporated apart from what you have brought…like A large number of small and marginal farmers are distressed as the current system of market institution doubly squeezes them, in input as well as output…, Since the post-reforms policy regime in 1991, agriculture has been facing multiple crises….,The rising pressure of population on land and agriculture, besides sluggishness in the shifting of workforce away from agriculture, has adversely affected small and marginal farmers….etc..etc…
-There are very few measures mentioned…that too are very general…
Overall, attempt is good…however, need to address all aspects asked in question…hence need to have more focus on question…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4.5/12.5
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST22530
3rd Jan 2019
Ans 2:
Hi Tabassum,
-Please leave margin and increase your font size…
-Introductory para is too big…and there is nothing mentioned about Nepal…The question is related to the relationship between India and Nepal…however, your answer is more inclined towards showing relationship between Indian and China…
-Narrow ideas with poor approach…need to have more focus on question…
Such answer is termed as below average answer…though keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST22530
3rd Jan 2019
Ans 1:
Hi Tabassum,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…adhere to the UPSC format…please remember, one line should not contain more than 5-6 words…
-Good ideas in introduction…however, its too long, need to shorten it…
-The rest of the points are very general ans has been left incomplete…The answer is incomplete…
Please refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST22691
3rd Jan 2019
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Hi invictus,
Kindly upload answers one by one separately…
01)
-The presentation seems to be poor…we are not supposed to start with diagram…there should be proper introduction to a question…
-Also the same sentences have been repeated many times…its not a good practice concerning the word limit…
-Ideas mentioned are poor and not having conformity with the question…
-structure wise as well as content wise the answer is very poor…
Though, keep writing….will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
02
-There is no introduction in answer…Nothing is mentioned about India-Nepal relation…
-Mixed up ideas in issues…It would be good if we mention the issues separately for India and for China…Also few issues only have been brought…
-The measures suggested are somewhat good…though it could be more better…
-conclusion could have been much better…
Overall below average answer…Keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
03
-Introduction seems good…Points on first page is okay…though there are many other reasons also…
-Positive consequences and negative consequences are also seems okay…
-Avoid using tabular form…mention everything in paragraph…though ideas in measures are okay…but need to arrange them in paragraph…
-Conclusion is absent…
Overall good attempt…more focus on structure as well as in content is what required…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
04
-Poor answer…not at par with the question asked…
I think you didn’t get the question properly…
Here, we need to talk about the individual conscience or values which s/he learned from the society…I would like to clarify with example – For example: dowry is an act of criminal and is prohibited by Dowry Prohibition Act 1961. However, still the practice of dowry acceptance and giving is rampant in various part of India and is seen as a prestige in accepting it. More amounts (in quantity) in dowry lead more prestige to the family giving or accepting it….this is because the thinking of society has been moulded in the same way…However, this practice is unethical and hence we can say that Without commonly shared and widely entrenched moral values and obligations, neither the law, nor democratic government, nor even the market economy will function properly….
Though good…keep writing…will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Ans-4
Hi Bhagya,
-The answer is not at par with the question asked…ideas mentioned are very poor and not supporting the viewpoint of question…
I think, you didn’t get what actually the question is asking…
Here, we need to talk about the individual conscience or values which s/he learned from the society…I would like to clarify with example – For example: dowry is an act of criminal and is prohibited by Dowry Prohibition Act 1961. However, still the practice of dowry acceptance and giving is rampant in various part of India and is seen as a prestige in accepting it. More amounts (in quantity) in dowry lead more prestige to the family giving or accepting it….this is because the thinking of society has been moulded in the same way…However, this practice is unethical and hence we can say that Without commonly shared and widely entrenched moral values and obligations, neither the law, nor democratic government, nor even the market economy will function properly….
Though, good attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Ans-3
Hi Bhagya,
-Answer is good…the introductory para seems okay…
-However, the 2nd para need a bit justification…clarify why this has not been a long term measure…Also clarify why it has been a populist measure…
-The rest of the points are very good and well written…with a good conclusion…
Overall, nice attempt…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5
And-2
Hi Bhagya,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…
-Answer seems to be good…points mentioned are good…and precise…
-However, conclusion could have been much better…
Though nice attempt…need to focus on framing intro and conclusion…the rest of the points are well written…keep writing..
Marks awarded: 5.5/10
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Ans-1
Hi Bhagya,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…remember, one line should not contain more than 5-6 words…
-Introduction seems okay….okay…Points mentioned are very general…
-However, your points hovers around politics only…most of your points links geography with politics only…there are other linkages also…like Geography influences the living condition of people, livelihood, economy, market system, food habit, crops growing and subsequently administration…administration is governed by politics and are also vice versa…
Overall, very general approach…need to bring diversity and multi-view approach in your answer…keep writing will improve…
-Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST22533
Ans 2
Hi Rahul,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…remember one line should not contain more than 5-6 words…
-The answer is very good and well written with precisely arranged ideas…covered almost all the aspects…impressive…
Nice approach…good attempted answer…well done…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/10
CDTEST22580
Ans 4
Hi GK,
-The answer seems to different from the question asked…it is not at par with the question…I think you didn’t get the question properly…
–Here we need to talk about the individual conscience or values which s/he learned from the society…I would like to clarify with example – For example: dowry is an act of criminal and is prohibited by Dowry Prohibition Act 1961. However, still the practice of dowry acceptance and giving is rampant in various part of India and is seen as a prestige in accepting it. More amounts (in quantity) in dowry lead more prestige to the family giving or accepting it….this is because the thinking of society has been moulded in the same way…However, this practice is unethical and hence we can say that Without commonly shared and widely entrenched moral values and obligations, neither the law, nor democratic government, nor even the market economy will function properly….
Though nice attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST22580
Ans 3
Hi Gk,
-The answer is very good…
-The points are very good…covered most of the issues and well written & arranged…
-However, conclusion could have been much better with more opinion of you own…
-Though nice attempt…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5
CDTEST22580
Ans 2
Hi GK,
-Introduction seems okay…the points mentioned are also good…however, it would be good if we mention points separately…like issues for India, and issues of Nepal…
-Though points mentioned by you are also good…but they need arrangement…
-Ideas in conclusion could have been much better…
Overall, nice attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10
CDTEST22580
Ans 1
Hi GK,
-The answer seems to be good…with well written points and and well arranged ideas…
-Nice attempt…well done…keep it up…
Marks awarded: 7/15
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ltof9UpfCMv_yEHPQpcCzIyka0QhHJGj/view?usp=drivesdk
Improve ur handwriting..i also have bad handwriting.i am a lefty so i face problem .gradually adjussting with 24 word per min speed.
If handwriting is illegible even for an answer that deserves 6 out of 10, hardly 1.5..specially when some have very good handwfiting and ok content ( in that case an otherwise undeserving answer gets 6 )
please review
Hi Roopak,
Kindly upload the image format…and upload answers separately…it will be confusing to review all the answers together…Please upload again…
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CDTEST22486
Hi Deepika,
-The answer seems to be okay…However, your approach is narrow…your concern is confined with the individual only.
-Commonly shared values means wider consent of masses where more individual wants to adhere the ethical principles and give up the habits which are not in conformity…
For example: Dowry system which is rampant in practice despite its being ethically wrong. But the individual conscience here is to have more amount as dowry in order to get more respect in society. This is the commonly shared value and practice.
Though your attempt is good…try being more specific to the point with wider view of ideas, the rest is okay…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/12.5
CDTEST22486
Hi Deepika,
-Introduction seems okay…However, you have not mentioned why it has been a populist measure…reasons are the political only though it provides temporary relief to farmers…its like filling temporary gap…
-consequences mentioned are very general…
-Measures brought are also few…talk about removing middle man, interlinking of market with input and production,increased subsidy and tax concession to farmers, government should give agro-processing industry a policy push to pull rural people out of agriculture…etc…
-The rest of the points are good…bring more focus on question…
Overall, good attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 3.5/12.5
CDTEST22486
Hi Deepika,
-Introduction need more elaboration or more ideas required here…
-The points mentioned are good…and in flow…
However, there are some issues between India and Nepal which disappoints Nepal…like Madhesi crisis, month long blockade, India silence at the time of blockade, intervention in constitution framing, interfering in internal matters of Nepal etc…Keeping in mind these issues Nepal’s inclination to China is a worry for India.
-China’s proactive approach towards dealing with Nepal add fuel to India’s concern. signing of trade agreement, recognizing OBOR and infrastructural development in Nepal by China etc…is a major concern for India.
The rest of the points are good and well written…just add the above points in order to complete the answer…
-Good attempt…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5/10
Answer 4 Id: CDTEST22553
Hi Stevie G,
-The answer is not at par with the question asked…I think you didn’t get the quesstion properly…
-Here we need to talk about the individual conscience or values which s/he learned from the society…I would like to clarify with example – For example: dowry is an act of criminal and is prohibited by Dowry Prohibition Act 1961. However, still the practice of dowry acceptance and giving is rampant in various part of India and is seen as a prestige in accepting it. More amounts (in quantity) in dowry lead more prestige to the family giving or accepting it….this is because the thinking of society has been moulded in the same way…However, this practice is unethical and hence we can say that Without commonly shared and widely entrenched moral values and obligations, neither the law, nor democratic government, nor even the market economy will function properly….
-Though your attempt is good…more focus on question needed…keep writing will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Answer 2 ID; CDTEST22553
Hi Stevie G,
-Good ideas in introduction…
-However, The points mentioned further in main body are not arranged in logical order…Also, there in nothing mentioned about China’s initiatives in Nepal like building roads, railway lines etc…
-There are very few points which talks about the issues between India and Nepal….need to incorporate more…
-Overall, the answer is very general, and can be termed as an average one…More focus needed on question…
-Keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 2.5/10
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Answer 1 Id: CDTEST22553
Hi Stevie G,
-First of all, the entire page in not for writing…please leave margin on both edges of the page…
-2nd, avoid using diagram for all the answers…especially when the points can be explained in paragraphs…UPSC aspires us to write in paragraph using flow of language and hence diagram and tabular format will not work…the marks will be provided accordingly…
Now reviewing your answer…
-Poor introduction….Your points are not connected to the logic you are providing…
Democracy is different and fulfilling the aspiration of people in democratic country is different from being dependent on the geographical factors…
Geography influences the living condition of people, livelihood, economy, market system, food habit, crops growing and subsequently administration…
The points are not at par with the question asked…
-You need to have more conceptual clarity regarding the topic…
Though good attempt…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 3/12.5
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CDTEST22416
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Hi n b,
-First of all some suggestion…please leave margin on both edges of the page. write 5 to 6 words in one line and not more than that…
-There is no introduction and conclusion in your answer…
-However, the ideas mentioned are good, need to arrange them in logical order…
Though good attempt…nice approach for first time…keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 6/15
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CDTEST22416
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Hi n b,
-The answer has not been uploaded properly…unable to open the first page…kindly upload it again…
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CDTEST22416
Cdstest21345
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