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Answer 4
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Answer 2
Hi Kapiushon
– First part of the answer is OK.
– But the discussion in the second part is out of direction. While the first point of the legitimacy argument is decent, but the rest of the points are not necessary in the context of question. Instead you have to discuss the role of discretionary powers of speakers wrt no confidence motion and other things.
– Maintaining decorum of the house or sittings of the house has nothing to do with the legitimacy.
Marks: 5.5/15
CDTEST22496 Ans 2
Hi Lekha
– Once again, nothing wrong in the answer.
– The direction of the discussion is on the expected path and language crisp.
– The explanation is quite decent.
– Keep writing and keep it up.
Marks: 7/15
CDTEST22496 Ans 3
Hi Lekha
– All the parts are nicely covered.
– Discussion is simple yet crisp.
– Language, structure and presentation, of an otherwise lengthy issue, is quite nice.
– Overall good attempt.
Marks: 6.5/12.5
Hi Sir,
Thank you for the review. Are there model answers available that i can go through? If they are, please share the link with me. Thank you
Hi Lekha,
You can find the Model Answer by clicking on the same question itself.
CDTEST22496 Ans 1
Hi Lekha
– The way forward and conclusion are the soul of your answer.
– All the points are nicely covered and well explained.
– The coverage of the answer is comprehensive and wide.
Marks: 6/10
Hi Dhritiman
– Though you tried to discuss many points but you missed some key elements of the discussion.
– You have to work on your presentation and make the answer more readable.
– Way forward is good.
Marks: 4/12.5
Ans!.
Hi Dhritiman
– In the inro, mention some of the recent famous social movements.
– Lack of awareness, corruption, inequality in the society, short term goals, high handedness of authorities are some of the other important reasons for failing social movements.
– Way forward is out sync. Better way forward in needed like awareness, capacity building, raising equality, better reception from the authorities etc are points to be mentioned.
Marks: 3/10
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Ans 1
Hi Rahul
– The direction of the answer is good but you have not gone deeper into the discussion.
– More explanation is needed.
– Answer started well but the main body of the answer suffered from average discussion.
– Better way forwards like awareness, capacity building, raising equality, better reception from the authorities etc are points to be mentioned.
Marks: 4/10
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Ans 4
Hi gk
– Decent attempt.
– You covered all the dimensions of the case and had proper reasoning behind each move.
– Good attempt overall.
Marks: 5/10
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Ans 3
Hi GK
– While the answer is decent, but work on your presentation.
– Highlight the sub headings and give some space after changing discussion.
– Points are good but you will lose out marks if not written in better presentation skills.
Marks: 6/12.5
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Ans 2
Hi gk
– Little lengthy intro.
– As mentioned earlier, provide some gap between changing discussins.
– Better second half of the answer is needed.
– First half (powers) discussed in good manner.
– No way forward or conclusion.
Marks: 5/15
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Ans 1
Hi GK
– Good intro.
– Good discussion in the reasons part.
– But no way way forward or conclusion once again in your answer.
Marks: 3.5/10
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Ans 2,Time 13min
Hi Harsimran
– The first part your answer is really good and crisp.
– The second point of discussion of legitimacy of the govt is wayward. Rather than mentioning adjournment motion, you have to discuss the point that speaker is the authority to check the anti defection laws and apply it on its members. That is a big task given that the legitimacy of a government might depend on certain numbers of MLAs or MPs voting in favor or against them. In this regard, the speaker has the discretionary power.
– Rest of the answer is fine.
– Structure decent and way forward good.
Marks: 6.5/15
Point for legitimacy noted
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Ans 1
Hi Harsimran
– Answer starts well.
– Better points would have made the first half of the answer quite decent. Points like short term goals, leaderless movements or weak leaders, corruption, greed are some of the reasons too.
– Good conclusion
Marks: 5.5/10
Thanks Parth,keep reviewing
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Ans 2
Ans 3
Ans2.
– Very Good Answer.
– You have covered almost all the necessary discussions on the question asked.
– The only improvement i would suggest in the answer is the presentation of the answer.
Marks: 7.5/15
Ans 3
– Do mention RBI’s forecast of India’s growth as it is mentioned in the question itself. Then proceed to address the rest of the answer.
– Your first part of the main body is quite good and comprehensive.
– But your second part (way forward) is weak and needs more strength (better points)
– Structure and language is good.
Marks: 5/12.5
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Hi roopak
– Kindly upload your answers on the website rather than using another platform. That makes our work easier.
Ans1.
– Good first half but answer ends abruptly. There is no way forward (how to improve our social movements) and conclusion.
– Work is needed on your presentation
Marks: 3.5/10
Ans2.
– More discussion needed in the powers of speakers,
– First and second points of the legitimacy discussion is not needed and out of order.
– Better points like no confidence motion or anti defection law hearings or money bills are needed.
Marks: 5/15
Ans3.
– Do mention RBI’s forecast in the intro because its mentioned in the question itself. Make it your base of the intro and then discuss the issues with Indian economy.
– Too much focus on external factors and weak discussion in domestic reasons.
– Better way forward (more points) is needed.
Marks: 4/12.5
Ans4.
– You have covered all the aspects of the discussion.
– Nothing wrong with the answer.
– Work on your presentations though. Make your writing clearer.
Marks: 6/10
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Hi Sandeep,
– Very good discussion.
– But way forward needs little bit more discussion then the one you have done.
– Structure, placement of points, language, all are good.
Marks: 5.5/10
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ANS 3.
Hi n b
– Better intro is needed. It gives you a perfect cushion for your answers.
– Good answer overall.
– Lack of a good intro and conclusion is the only sore point of the answer.
Marks: 6.5/12.5
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ANS 2.
Hi n b
– Good first half
– In the second half, you can mention his/her role in anti defection law. That will enhance your answer.
– Good conclusion.
Marks: 6/15