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CDTEST 21377
Ans 1
Hi Imgroot,
-Answer is very good and well written…
-Introduction seems to be okay…points are precisely written and arranged…
-Points under reforms needed are also good…
-However, conclusion is absent…which also holds equal importance…Please incorporate conclusion also…
Overall, very good attempt…Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6/10
Cdtest21345
ans 4
Hi Anita,
Please work on your handwriting…write the letters of the words properly so that it should not pose any difficulty in reading…
-Presentation is very poor…this is not the way we answer ethics case study…
-There is no introduction…you directly started with the action…also you have used 1st person involving yourself…use third person…
-Ideas are also poor…as it has been already mentioned in question that he is a person of repute…even asking him directly may infuse violence…so need to think in wider sense…
You need to have the framework clarity as well as to incorporate wider ideas in your answer…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
okay sir thank u
Cdtest21345
Hi Dhritiman,
-Ideas in introduction is good…however, it needs more clarity…
-The ideas in first part seems okay…however, the ideas in 2nd part is very general…the concern mentioned is very general…
-The justification here should be provided with the existing provisions of the bill…like confiscating property, attachment of property, special court, disentitlement of persons from any civil claims etc…
Under concern…An absolute ban is contrary to the basic tenets of justice and fair play, besides being in violation of the Indian Constitution…Violates principle of innocent unless proven guilty…not easy to find buyers etc….etc….
Also bring conclusion…
Overall, attempt is good..need to bring more specific ideas rather than the general one…keep writing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4.5/15
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Cdtest21345
Hi Drhitiman,
-Please enumerate which question’s answer you are writing…
-Please avoid too much highlighting or underlining of lines…
-Introductory line is poor…
-points are good and well written…good arrangement of ideas…with good conclusion as well…
-Overall, good attempt…nice approach…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/15
Cdtest2!345
Hi Dhritiman,
-Please increase your font size…
-Introduction is poor…focuses more on jobs without any connectivity to education…(refer our model answer)
-Point under concern are good…and well written…
-Points under measures are okay…
-However, Conclusion is absent…
Overall, good attempt…need to work on intro and conclusion…as well as in improving your handwriting…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4/10
CDTEST 21004. Answer 1
Hi Shefali,
-The ideas in introduction is good…rather very good…but to make them more attractive logical arrangement needed…first talk about the global demand which you have mentioned in 2nd para…then bring India’s status…as in 1st para…
-Points under issues related to Indian education is okay…however, some important points have been missed…like poor infrastructure, teacher pupil ratio, teacher’s ability especially in government schools, also social factor like higher dropout due to poverty and unemployment to parents, dropout specially among girls etc…etc…
-However, the ideas under reforms are more like philosophical one…we can suggest of incorporating ICT in education on the line of modern demand..[point e) is good one]…more focus on practicality rather than theory, building infrastructure especially for girls education, influencing poor strata to send their children to school, incentives like mid day meal, ssa, etc…etc…
-Good conclusion…
Overall, good attempt…but don’t be more of generalist…a bit specificity in point is needed…think with more wider views…
Keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 5/10
CDTEST21358 Ans-1
-Hi Shivani,
-Introductory line seems poor…the first line has been said in different context, but using it here conveys different meaning…how can a bullet change a life…gives negative context…(This line can be used when we are writing about terrorism or insurgency etc…
-Also the introductory para does not talk about India…
-The points of concerns are good…
-What is PISA Act…???? need elaboration…and clarity…
-Points under Reforms needed or way forward seems general…need to bring specificity…talk about more skill development in line of global demand, more emphasis on practicality in education rather than theory…etc…
-Conclusion could have been more better and comprehensive…
Though good attempt..keep writing…
Work on handwriting…and also avoid overwriting in answers…
Marks awarded: 4/10
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST21358 Ans-2
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Hi Shivani,
-Ideas of introduction need more elaboration…
-Under features first two points are okay…though more points are also there like confiscation of property, attachment of property, issue of notice by Special Court, Dis-entitlement from civil claims etc…These points are equally important…and need to be mentioned…
-The rest of the points are good…and well written…
-Conclusion is good…
Overall, good attempt…well written answer…need to work on handwriting…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5.5/15
ANS-1
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Hi Swetha,
-Introduction could have been much better…
-All the points under India’s state of education sector has focus towards education only and not mentioning about the problems of employability…we need to connect poor education system with that of poor employability…
-Under necessary reforms…if both education and employability are taken into concern then we need to talk about the skill training with practical aspects of education apart from the theoretical one…
Overall answer stands incomplete with the concern of question…both the aspects need to be connected and accordingly points need…
Though good attempt…need to have more focus on question…keep writing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 3.5/10
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
ANS-2
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Hi Swetha,
-The answer is very good…Ideas are well written with precise points and beautiful arrangement…good one…
-Well Done…Keep it up…
Marks awarded: 7.5/15
CDTEST21238
Ans1
Sir, I have started drawing margins from 13th Dec AWE. These were answers posted before that. So please excuse.
Hi GK,
-Very good answer…good flow of ideas with precisely written points…I cannot find any thing to strike in this answer…good one…
-You have improved much from earlier answers…
Well done…keep it up…
Marks awarded: 6/10
CDTEST21238
Ans2
Hi GK,
-Introduction seems to be very poor…here we need to explain what is Fugitive Economic Offence means…and give examples of the Malya and Nirav Modi…then followed by the provisions of new bill…arrange the ideas in logical manner…
-The points are very good and well explained…precisely written ideas…
Overall, good answer…except intro…well done…keep it up…
Marks awarded: 7/15
CDTEST21238
Ans3
Hi GK,
-Answer is very good…well written ideas and precisely presented points…
Well done…keep it up…
Marks awarded: 7.5/15
CDTEST21238
4
Ans
Hi GK,
-Case study should always start with the introduction…bring a general introduction that this case study talks about the social activist involved in selling cows to slaughter houses…
-Next asses what all actions are available with you…You have mentioned only two possible actions…
-1st one seems irrelevant…you need to take action…not doing anything will not serve the purpose…and also will not justify with the post you are holding…
-2nd point seems okay…however, this also does not present complete picture…
Overall, the answer seems only as a reference without any concrete ideas…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Keep writing…
CDTEST 21004 answer 3
Hi Shefali,
-Introduction seems okay…
-Points are good and well explained…
We focused more on higher education producing highly skilled labour force…and given less concern to basic skill which created deficit of labour force in manufacturing sector…after LPG we were facing shortage of basic labour force to work in manufacturing sector…and hence for few decades India’s growth was led by few sectors only i.e. service and agriculture…
-The rest of the points are good with good conclusion…
Overall, good attempt…well written answer…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/15
CDTEST20453 ans 3
Hi Puru,
-Ideas in introduction is good…
-Page 1st…last point…labour law is still stringent and hindering the progress of economy…
Also we had more focus on higher education means producing highly skilled manpower before LPG since 5th FYP and hence led to the shortage of labour force in manufacturing sectors…
– The rest of the points are good and well explained…
-Conclusion is absent…
Overall, good attempt…well written answer…need to focus on framework…Intro/main body/conclusion…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7/15
please check other answer also many are posted ur speed has slowed down sir
answ 1 CDTEST20453 ans 3
Hi Puru,
-Introduction seems poor…the question asks about the global demand in education and employability…you can start from the findings of some institutions or organisations etc…and show the reason of poor education and skill development leading to unemployability…
-2nd page third point…high level of corruption seems irrelevant…there can be negligence in implementation of schemes, lack of infrastructure, monitoring mechanisms etc. can be the logical argument in its place…
-Under reforms needed: add points like use of ICT in teaching, building better and attractive infrastructure, bringing practicality in education etc. etc.
-Conclusion is good…
Overall, good attempt…good written points…need to be a bit more specific in some of the points…also some articulation needed in introduction…the rest is very good…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5/10
ans 2 CDTEST20453
Hi Puru,
-Introductory sentence formation is poor…you have used colloquial language…though ideas are good…articulation of sentences needed…
-Points are good and well written…concerns mentioned are also good…
-However, there is no conclusion in answer…conclusion holds equal importance in answer so we should no avoid it…
Overall, nice approach…well written…well done…keep it up…
Marks awarded: 7/15
CDTEST20663
Answer 2
Hi Kapiushon,
-Answer seems to be very good…precisely written points…well presented ideas…well done…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7.5/15
CDTEST21316
ANS 4