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CDTEST20663
Answer 1
hi Kapiushon
your introduction is very poor confusing and repetition of words.
In Body-
add few more points and heavy weight words…
In way forward, you need to mention schemes like himayat, roshini etc.
best practices by NGO’s, state govt. to add weight to answer.
otherwise your answer seems to be superficial.
conclusion is also poor
lastly u need to work upon your handwriting, spelling asap.
refer to model answer..
keep writing.
CDTEST20663
Answer 1
hi Kapiushon
you need to work upon introduction.
secondly, you have explained just 3 points..rather shorten your points to add few more points like swaraj, swadeshi, rural deindustrialization etc..
separate it in 2 parts like british ideology and 2nd part as gandhi critique…
refer to model answer to see more points
keep writing
CDTEST22496 Ans 3
hi lekha_27
it seems you have missed the functions of EBRD or had tried to club it with intro..
please refer to model answer for functions of EBRD.
benefits points needs to be improved…you have missed major benefits of EBRD for india…
please refer to model answer
or
https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699
CDTEST22496 Ans 1
hi lekha_27
your answer good.
what you need to shorten your 1st para, so that you can add upon other aspects of western ideology..and other aspects of Gandhian ideology and how it countered western ideology
keep writing..
refer to model answer
CDTEST22496 Ans 2
hi lekha_27
your answer seems to be superficial..
1st shorten your introduction, which will give you space to write more in body
2nd you need to give example/facts to support your points.
you have missed points like political instability, glorification of terrorists, changing pattern of J&K clash…
3rd mention govt schemes, armed forces initiatives
refer model answer
keep writing…
Answer 3 . ID: CDTEST22553
hi Stevie G
please shorten your intro so that incorporate more points in body.
otherwise your answer is good, to the point.
keep writing
refer to model answer
Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553
hi Stevie G
your intro has no correlation with question. please don’t experiment with your answer writing…
2nd your body seems to be repetitive and haphazard…you need to short and to the point backed with examples.
3rd way forward should mention govt schemes..
you have mentioned intitiatives by armed forces..good point
conclusion missing
keep writing
refer to model answer
Answer to Q3: EBRD
HI The Last Crusader
PLEASE DON’T WRITE STORY INTRO..IT WILL KILL YOUR SPACE FOR BODY…
Functions part need to be backed by examples and clear (not generalised points)
conclusion part is not upto the mark and not clear, repetition of words..
keep writing
refer to model answer or
https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699
Hi The Last Crusader.
I’m not that good at reviewing answers. Nice presentation and a well written answer.
Same here,:)
I think we all in dire need to improve on this front (reviewing our own answers) as well.
Self Review:
Repetition of words(e.g promote) in answer.
Conclusion is not well formulated.
Need to provide more clear info, not to generalize statements
CDTEST22580
Ans 4
CDTEST22756
Ans 2
hi dark_horse16
overall your answer is fine with good examples in way forward..
what is needed is to add some examples to support your answer otherwise it will be superficial..
2nd also mention govt initiatives in way forward..
3rd conclusion is poor.. need improvement..
keep writing
refer model answer.
CDTEST22580
Ans 3
Hi GK,
very well articulated answer..keep it up..
just cut out 2-3 lines in intro ie historical aspect not needed…
keep writing
Hi GK,
The overall presentation is good. You have mentioned functions and benefits in good pointed manner.
If i have interpreted right from your answer, it might be a content error in context of benefits to India. EBRD has focused its area in central-eastern Europe and central Asia only. It may not invest in Indian private sector.
If its ok with you,Please review mine.
CDTEST22580
Ans 2
Hi GK,
your intro is fine, but your body part is poor..need improvement asap
you need to support your points with examples/facts otherwise it seems superficial..
In way forward
1st point (OPERATION ALL OUT) is not the solution..
2nd your points are below average.. ie generalised points will not fetch you marks
mention govt schemes, initiatives of armed forces etc.
refer to model answer
keep writing
CDTEST22580
Ans 1
Hi GK,
intro is missing.
body-
british ideology part is good
gandhi critique is good.. add examples to it and few other points.
keep writing
refer to model answer.
Ans 1 CDTEST22513
hi Viney Kumar
your answer seems to be essay/story type…with minimum points related to the questions..
you need to work on answer writing asap…
refer to model answer
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mY6jXgftbpDfjqA6TYE5WS3WsZI5xz2z/view?usp=drivesdk
answer 1
hi Manish yadav
the answer you have uploaded seems to be incomplete…
please ensure from next time that you have uploaded full answer
Thanks for the review
answer 2
hi Manish yadav
please upload answer in proper way..
intro is good.
body-
reasons-
main points has been missed, few points can be clubbed in one (ex point and 2 ), add examples without it will be superficial.
way forward-
shorten your points so that you can accommodate more points…
add govt schemes.
last para of your ans should be conclusion with optimism.
refer model answer.
Thank you of your reviews , I will try to mend my mistakes nd not to create in next answer
Ans2.
hi dhritiman@iim dropout,
you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…
lastly your answer is below average with poor content
refer model answer.
Ans1.
hi dhritiman@disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…
intro missing, which western ideology he opposed needs to be mentioned…
overall poor content,presentation, haphazard writing style
refer model answer.
Thnk u ..latley i have changed