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CDTEST 23406 ANS 3
hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
your answer seems to be okay..
you need to shorten intro max 3-4 lines, so that you can do justice to demand of question…
emphasize upon social communication hub clearly rather generalised points
elaborate upon why such steps is needed…
last para is placed haphazardly…
lastly conclusion is missing..
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CDTEST 23406 ANS2
hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
intro is good.
1st part of body missed main points like connectivity, security aspects…
2nd part of question has not been answered…what economic transformation of Bangladesh mean for the Subcontinent as a whole.
conclusion is fine..
keep writing
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CDTEST22496 Ans 3
hi lekha_27,
well written answer…
just ellaborate upon Social Media Communication hub in intro…
2nd use words like data privacy, examples need to be quoted especially recent incident of facebook
3rd mention justice BN krishna committe points,
4th give example of The General Data Protection Regulation (EU)
shorten your conclusion to accommodate above points
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CDTEST22496 Ans 2
hi lekha_27,
well articulated answer…
just add examples as they are missing in many points…
2ndly, elaborate on point 3 ie regional and global…
3rdly, private investment aspect missing…
shorten you conclusion max 4-5 lines…
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CDTEST22496 Ans 1
hi lekha_27,
nice answer…
improvement-
point 1- you can add articles of part 3/4, various facts related to inequality. this add weight to it.
point 2- here also you can add articles of part 3/4, give example of growing tendency of surveillance state etc
point 3 give examples of recent happenings
point 4 give examples
keep writing
CDTEST22672
Ans 1
hi harsimran kaur,
well understanding of question written with contemporary examples…
but, points seems to repetitive..please take care of that..
rather club 2 parts of body and explain there only..
don’t write such long conclusion rather add few more aspects in body..
And am not getting compilations,where is it uploaded on site?
Will take care of it
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Answer 2 . Id: CDTEST22553
hi Stevie G ,
No need of historical aspect in intro…just give 2-3 line intro
body-
poor structure, haphazard presentation
missed major points..
2nd part of your body is totally out of context to the demand of question. read carefully to meet the demand of question
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Ans3.
hi @disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
it seems you have not read previous suggestion…
you are still continuing with your rough answer writing and poor handwriting…
please work on it asap
These are answers uploaded before suggestion.i am removing the next answers
CDTEST22580
Ans 4
CDTEST22580
Ans 2
hi gk
intro seems to be okay..
body-
1st part need improvement in few points…
2nd part of question is not answered well rather repetition of points which can be clubbed in 1-2 points
don’t write long conclusion to fill pages it will not fetch you mark rather add more aspects in body…
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CDTEST22580
Ans 3
hi gk
intro is okay..elaborate upon social media comm. hub.
body
points seems to be repetitive..
missed main points to add weight to answer
just 2 points to cons..add few more points
poor conclusion..
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CDTEST22580
Ans 1
hi gk
it seems you have totally digressed from demand of question…
you need to elaborate upon his ideologies and how it is relevant today…
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CDTEST22917Q.4
CDTEST22917
Q.3
hi Satyam Akotiya
your intro is poor…
2ndly please elaborate upon social media communication hub..
3rdly pros part can be clubbed in just 2 points..don’t repeat by changing words..
cons part example missing
not good conclusion…need improvement again repetition
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CDTEST22416
ANS 3.
hi n b,
intro seems to be okay..please elaborate on social media communication hub..
body..
few points seems to be incomplete…
others aspects are fine
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Question 2
hi Manish yadav
don’t experiment with your answer writing…despite good points you will not get good marks because of poor presentation…
2ndly you have missed 2nd part of question..
rather written which is not demand of question..
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