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Cdtest21345
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Cdtest21345
Hi Anita,
-Introduction seems okay…
-The language in 2nd para is poor…please work on articulating language….avoid using colloquial language…
-1st para of 2nd page is irrelevant….bring concrete point…you are repeating the same idea which the question is asking…instead of replying or answering…bring evidence…
-Points are too general and also not logically arranged…
-Overall, below average answer…
Please refer our model answer for better clarity…
thank u sir i will refer that.
ANS-3
Hi Sweta,
-Poor introduction…the points gets started randomly…also the individual points are incomplete not conveying complete idea…
-Points under Steps taken by government are good…
-Again the 2nd part i.e. Minimum Basic payment…the argument starts randomly without explaining anything about MBP…Though good points under concerns…
-Conclusion is very good…
-Overall, good attempt…need to work on introduction and bringing linkages among points…the rest is good…
Keep practicing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4.5/15
CDTEST21004 Answer. 1
Hi Shefali,
-Please pay attention to the word limit…
-Introductory para is good…but 1st para and 2nd para both contains almost the same ideas and seems like repetition…
-The rest of the points are very good and explained beautifully…Nice answer…
-Need to modify the introduction a bit…except intro the answer is very good…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 5.5/10
CDTEST 21004. Answer 2
Hi Shefali,
-Please ensure the upload is in proper direction…
-Introduction seems to be good…
-Ideas under sedition law is okay…However, the points under issues with sedition Act need logical arrangement with more clarity in idea…Mere criticism to government and government working should not be termed as criticism…which has been witnessed in recent times…Example – JNU case…Examples mentioned here need more clarity…
-2nd page 1st para…SC judgement…it should not be ‘speaking against the government’…rather positively criticizing the government should not be seen as sedition…
-Under some measures…There should be regulation of free speech and expression. It should not be set on the free will of speakers other wise will create chaos in society…effective and positive restriction is necessary…
-You have not answered the 2nd part of the question…why it is still important….Here we can mention that… with diverse society, multiculturalism the demand of all can not be fulfilled absolutely by the government and hence people tend to take rebelious action…in such condition this law still holds its importance…
-Conclusion should not be ought rightly rejecting…it should be a balanced one…
Overall, Good attempt…need to bring specificity and more wider views regarding the topic…
Keep practicing…will improve for sure…Refer our model answer…
Marks awarded: 3.5/10
CDTEST21358 Ans-2
Hi shivani,
-Introduction seems incomplete…Misuse in reported but when (in British India or in Present days)…
-who is rulers here…? Points need clarity…they seem to be incomplete conveying incomplete meaning..Points are too general…you are only talking that law has been invoked without any evidence or proof…such attempt is immature and incomplete…
-Overall, the answer is without concrete point and explained in general manner without any examples…Also there is no sufficient argument why this law is still important…Such attempts shows lack of conceptual clarity regarding the topic…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Marks awarded: 3/10
CDTEST20324 Ans-2
Hi Prafull,
-Introduction is very good..and well written…
-Points are also good…
-However, under defending this law…we can say that it has the potential to curb the uprising in various parts of India…like naxalism and maoism…and other hatred uprisings which may be by any groups…so it helps in maintaining internal security…rather than external…
-The points under conclusion is more like way forward…write conclusion in paragraph…without any numberings…
Overall, good attempt…and well written answer…keep it up…keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6/10
CDTEST21238
Ans1
Hi GK,
-Answer seems to be good…
-However, one thing we must accept here that India does not have chronologically mentioned historical events…
-The examples mentioned are okay…though we can also include…Puranas, Samhitas, Rig-Vedas, Dharmashastras etc. as well as Indica by Megasthenes, Pliny’s Naturalis Historia, documents of Fa Hien, Hiuen Tsang etc…who wrote for the contemporary rulers of their times….here more we need to provide the evidence supporting the existence of written history…
-The logic of conclusion seems irrelevant…rather it should be contrary in nature…when you are countering that Indians do have the sense of history writing…then conclusion must support your argument…saying the allegation of foreign scholars are harsh and does not stand true…
Overall, Good attempt…well written and arranged…try incorporating above points which will bring more specificity in answer…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10
Thank you Sir. Will definitely improve.
CDTEST21238
Ans 2
Hi GK,
-Please leave margin on both edges of the page…its not worth writing without margin…develop habits now onwards…
-Your discussion seems to be okay…but the points are without any contemporary examples…
-Also need to mention the misuse of this section on the part of government…like punishing those who criticized government…distinction between criticism and growing against government…etc…bring example of recent JNU case…and other similar cases…
Overall, good attempt…incorporating relevant contemporary examples will add quality in your answer…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10
Yes Sir. This was posted sometimes back. Have been drawing margins ever since you told me to do.
CDTEST21238
Ans3
Hi GK,
-There is no introduction in your answer…You started with the points randomly…
-You need to link first five points (of first page) with the climate change…and distress leading to suicide…this is missing from answer…
-Government initiatives are okay…
-However, there is no mention about minimum basic payment…
Need more focus on the question and also need to address all aspects of the question…
Overall good…keep practicing…
Refer our model answer or other best answer reviewed for better clarity…
Marks awarded: 3.510
CDTEST21238
Ans 4
Hi GK,
-Introductory line is okay…However, it should also mention about the breakdown of moral or ethical order…
The next line just randomly gets started without any justification…and also there is no linkages among points…
-your emphasis is not on breakdown of ethical order…rather you have provided other reasons…focus is being away from the question…
-Points are explained in just general order…
This is an average answer…need to bring more focus on question…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Marks awarded: 3/10
Cdt
est21345 qs4.
Hi Dhritiman,
Please work on your handwriting…increase your font size…write letters of the word in proper way…
-The answer posted here is of different question…This answer is of 5th December’s question…Kindly ensure before uploading…
-Though I’m reviewing it here itself…
-Introduction could have been more comprehensive…incorporating the ideas of importance of moral values and other values taught by the parents and teachers…Your introduction is very general and repeating the same line of the question…
-Role of father is very good and well written…
-The role of mother is also okay…
But the role of teacher could have been better…teacher taught us the compete in this contemporary world with contemporary ideas…teacher gives us the skill which help us to earn our livelihood…they also shape our conduct and behavious in this world, they also teach us to live our skillful life…etc…
Also need to bring conclusion…
Overall, good attempt…need to complete the ideas in answer…don’t leave them incomplete…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10
ans1 CDTEST20453
Hi Puru,
-Answer seems to be very general…
-You have shown only 2 or 3 evidence of ancient literature…The concern is of absent of chronology…we were highly dependent on religious text like Mahabharata, Ramayana, Puranas, Samhitas, vedas etc…which does not talk in direct sense about chronology…However, they do bring the sense of knowing about the chronology…Koutilya’s Arthashastra, Indica by Mgasthanes, Pliny’s Naturalis Historia, documents of Fa Hien, Hiuen Tsang etc…who wrote for the contemporary rulers of their times….and in the sense provide about chronology…We need to bring more of evidence to support the argument…
-Ideas in conclusion is good…need to bring more clarity…
Overall, good attempt…need to have more focus on question and address all aspects asked…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
Marks awarded: 3.5/10
Dear pritam ,
My answers are not getting checked from last 8-9 days please let me knw the reason
Hi Puru,
Due to busy schedule I could not check the answers…I will finish checking all the answers most probably by tomorrow…
pritam please ceck my answrs also
no answers are getting checked
ANS4 CDTEST20453
Hi Puru,
First, there is a suggestion…divide ideas in small paragraphs…it should also appear to be separate…
-Answer seems to be okay…ideas mentioned are good but they need logical arrangement…
-Also, we need to mention the specific reasons why there is growing insecurity for female child in society…mention some of the family habit, practices, treating girl as inferior, more favour to male even if he makes mistakes, criminality in mindset, society being dumb on such issues even if anyone observes about any such incidents…etc…etc…
Then, next it should come about solution…(solutions by you are okay….) though more micro perspective you can add by saying that it should start from the family…family should treat every member equal…the say of every member should be adhered and implemented, then education system, equality in school, conduct by teachers, conduct by members of society etc…etc…
Overall, first part of the answer seems general…2nd part is okay…also need to be micro observer regarding the points…the rest is good….keep writing will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4.5/10
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
ANS2 CDTEST20453
Hi Puru,
-Introduction seems poor…more clarity needed here in points…also there is no sequence in ideas presentation…you started with present NCRB data, gone to justifying its existence, then talking about the colonial timings….Need to arrange your ideas logically…
-Third page 1st para seems without taking any stand…
Overall, good attempt…You have good ideas regarding the topic the need is to arrange the ideas logically and bring clarity in some points…
Keep writing…will improve for sure…
Marks awarded: 4/10
Refer our model answer for better clarity…
CDTEST20663
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Answer 2
CDTEST20663
Answer 2
Hi Kapiushon,
-Very good answer…very beautifully written with logical arrangement of ideas…nice presentation…well done…keep it up…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 6/10
CDTEST20663
Answer 4
Hi Kapiushon,
-Very impressive introduction…Points are very good with precisely written ideas and well explained with wider logic…good one…
-Solution seems to be okay…however, point number 4 on third page need to make more clear…why mental health?…mentality of youth including family and society need to be changed and influenced. we can take the help of social media in positive sense, schools, colleges, and other public places should be made equally accessed by male and female, mindset of the family members needs to change, parents need to treat their children with equality without any gender biased etc…etc…
-Conclusion could have much better with more comprehensive ideas…the ideas here is repeated…
Overall, good attempt…first part is well written…2nd part need some modification…the rest approach is good…
Keep writing..
Marks awarded: 5/10
CDTEST20663
Answer 4
Hi Kapiushon,
-Very good answer…very precisely written ideas…with very good presentation…This answer is one of the nice one which I found in this AWE program…Very good…well done…keep it up…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 8.5/15