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1. Give any decent fact from any report which highlights India’s vulnerability
2. What are the reasons for India’s vulnerability – explore all the climate, socio-economic and disaster-related reasons.
3. Provide both adaptation and mitigation mechanisms
https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/op-ed/indias-climate-score-high-on-vulnerability-low-on-resilience/article29334520.ece
Answer:
Climate change is no more an environmental concern. It has emerged as the biggest developmental challenge. India is among the most vulnerable to climate change. A number of Indian States have experienced extreme heat waves in the past three years, and the nation’s capital recently recorded a temperature of 48°C, its hottest day in 21 years. Likewise, Kerala experienced intense floods and landslides in 2018 and 2019, is among the States with the highest
density.
The reasons for India being rated high on climate vulnerability are as follows-
1. Poverty: According to multidimensional poverty index, 53% of Indians are multidimensional poor. Lack of inclusive policies and unresolved debate between environment and development would make poor and tribal people more vulnerable to climate change related activities.
2. Funding: Absence of well established green equity and debt markets in India along with USA pulling out of Paris Agreement has further complicated the funding mechanisms.
3. Technology: India lacks poorly in power efficient technologies like solar technologies and efficient thermal power plants. Low budgetary allocations towards research and development especially in the field of climate change makes India dependent on developed nations for technology transfer.
4. Data: India has inadequate mechanisms to collect data on climate change in India. Example: the changing flowering pattern of plants, breeding seasons of migratory birds, etc.
5. Lack of awareness: Despite numerous government initiatives, the solution to climate change lies with the people themselves. However, the lack of awareness among people hinders the success of various initiatives aiming at combating climate change.
6. Increasing temperatures and changing seasonal rainfall patterns are aggravating droughts and hurting agriculture and food security across the country.
7. India is not doing enough to boost its coastal and inland defences. These events become more damaging when infrastructure is not resilient.
8. A region’s vulnerability to temperature changes depends on several factors such as access to infrastructure (electricity, roads and water connections) and dependence on agriculture. According to the World Bank, central districts in India like Vidarbha region are the most vulnerable to climate change because they lack the infrastructure and are largely agrarian.
9. India’s exposure to climate hazards is heightened by the location of its vast coastline in the eye of the storm, across the Indian Ocean, Bay of Bengal and the Arabian Sea. For instance, in 2018-19, as many as 2,400 Indians lost their lives to extreme weather events such as floods and cyclones. The India Meteorological Department (IMD) says these events are increasing in both frequency and intensity.
Way forward
The government needs to do more to build resilience in the sectors of agriculture, fisheries, manufacturing, energy, transport, health, and education.
The priority for spending at the national and State levels for disaster management needs to rise.
Adequate resources must also be allocated for implementing climate action plans that most States have now prepared.
Equally, it also needs to replace urgently its fossil fuels with renewable energy.
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Perfect use of the diagram!
In one stroke you managed to discuss all those elements using so luch less space.
Keep it up.
If the topic is lengthy then one part can be discussed through a flowchart. This can be done in the 2nd part of the answer where mitigation can be discussed in the flowchart.
It will also help you in the presentation quotient of the answer.
All in all perfect answer.
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Poor presentation.
Lengthy paragraphs.
No point in discussing Brazil’s president’s steps in the answer.
It is like reading an editorial.
What are the reasons for India’s vulnerability – explore all the climate, socio-economic and disaster-related reasons.
Good way forward but poor execution. Write in bullet points under a subheading.
Right now your answers are looking like short essays or editorials with lengthy statements and lengthy paragraphs.
This is not ideal as we have discussed this multiple times.
Read the model answer for points and structure understanding.
Kindly review.
Good use of map. Headings are apt. I believe you could have added a few points related to vulnerability of Agriculture here as well. Or you were trying not to repeat the points from other answer on NICRA?
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The discussion on soil is very lengthy and can be edited. Simply talk about land degradation.
Good use of flowchart but it is quite haphazard.
Avoid this confusion.
Points can be placed in a better manner.
Work on the clarity of handwriting.
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Don’t repeat the statement of the question in your intro. Instead, mention some of the reports or facts regarding the situation to substantiate the point of the question.
The point of Himalayan is not linked with CC in 1st subheading.
The structure is haphazard.
You mentioned the steps taken by the govt. What more needs to be done apart from that? Give points in the way forward. Because the last line of the question specifically asks for it: “suggest efficient adaptation and mitigation mechanisms”
Points are decent.
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Hi Wasim
Good use of the diagram but try not to make such a large diagram. Smaller ones can do wonder.
The discussion in the 1st part needs to be balanced with your 2nd part.
Points are good but they can be curtailed using flowchart so that you give equal focus on way forward.
The content is decent.
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Hi Abhigyan
Better intro is needed. Link the issue with the facts of the report that you mentioned.
Good content.
The structure is decent.
Could improve the presentation style.
Use a flowchart in some part of the answer.
Decent way forward,
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Hi Akankhya
Very large intro.
Write a short intro introducing the topic of the question.
Then in the next part, discuss the 1st part of the main body which was “What are the reasons for India’s vulnerability – explore all the climate, socio-economic and disaster-related reasons”
You discussed briefly this point in the intro but that s not the ideal structure.
Read the model answer to see how subheadings and main body of the answer are structured.
The whole main body is the way forward. Try to balance your main body in a better manner.
Good points in the main body.
Read the model answer.
Very large concluding paragraph.
Read the answers of Wasim and Sahithya on the same page to understand what is the 1st part of the main body.
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Very good 1st part.
Underline important points.
You can make your presentation style better by using flowchart more frequently.
2ns part needs better points.
Read the model answer.
Good structure.
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Hi Yogesh
In the intro some reports regarding the Indian vulnerability regarding CC. There are many reports. Always give your intro a current affair link whenever it is possible.
The use of flowchart is done to make the answer’s presentation better. But your flowcharts are unclear, haphazard and need better clarity.
Your whole main body is only flowcharts That is not the ideal structuring and presentation.
If the topic is lengthy then one part can be discussed through a flowchart. But not all the parts of the answer.
You have to explain your points in a single statement.
Points in the flowchart are OK but this way you wont be getting much marks
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Good 1st part.
It is excellent that you divided the 2nd part’s discussion intro to urban and rural elements.
It is indeed a unique style.
The points in the answer are very good.
Nothing wrong here.