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- The question wants us to write in detail about the meaning and give a brief description of the term earthquake swarm. It also wants us to discuss in detail about the reasons behind the Earthquake Swarms being witnessed across many parts of India.
- In the introduction, write a few introductory lines about the term earthquake swarm. E.g ‘earthquake swarm’ which is a series of low magnitude earthquakes that occur in a localised region and over a period of time ranging from days, weeks to even months.
- In the main body describe the term in detail. E.g
- “When seismic energy piles up inside the Earth and is released in small amounts from certain points, such a series of earthquakes can occur,”
- Sometimes, these rumblings of the Earth are also accompanied by acoustic or sound emissions.
- The situation cannot be taken lightly as many earthquakes have been preceded by earthquake swarm activity.
- They come as foreshocks to the main earthquake which could be much greater in magnitude etc.
- Discuss the reasons behind earthquake swarms being witnessed across India. E.g
- Latur and Koyna earthquakes of 1993 and 1967, respectively.
- Deccan plateau
- an earthquake swarm near Bamhori village of Seoni district in Madhya Pradesh between February and May 2000. The swarm consisted of as many as 350 tremors.
- Rampur area of Himachal Pradesh. This Himalayan swarm was later attributed to low strength of the earth’s crust in the area which could not hold the tectonic energy etc.
Answer:
Earthquake swarms are generally defined as a sequence of events closely clustered in time and space without a single outstanding shock.
Earthquake Swarms:
- There are a series of low magnitude earthquakes that occur in a localised region and over a period of time ranging from days, weeks to even months. When seismic energy piles up inside the Earth and is released in small amounts from certain points, such a series of earthquakes can occur.
- They are differentiated from earthquakes succeeded by a series of aftershocks.
- When seismic energy piles up inside the Earth and is released in small amounts from certain points, such a series of earthquakes can occur.
- Sometimes, these rumblings of the Earth are also accompanied by acoustic or sound emissions.
- The situation cannot be taken lightly as many earthquakes have been preceded by earthquake swarm activity.
Reasons why earthquake swarms take place:
- Swarms are observed in volcanic environments, hydrothermal systems, and other active geothermal areas, according to geophysicists.
- In India, sequences of low-intensity quakes are common in areas that have been hit previously, like Saurashtra in Gujarat and Koyna in Maharashtra, but they are also seen in areas without a history of seismic activity.
- They are the result of seismic activity, hydro-seismicity due to water percolation post-monsoon, or magmatic activity in the region.
- In the Rampur area of Himachal Pradesh the earthquake swarm was later attributed to low strength of the earth’s crust in the area which could not hold the tectonic energy etc.
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Good intro.
The main body has good discourse in it.
The points are exhaustive and well explained and well presented.
Good conclusion.
In Geography questions, in order to score that extra mark is to make small diagrams explaining the phenomenon. This can be done with the science tech questions as well.
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Never start an answer with a subheading, Intros and conclusions are already intrinsic with their value and we know that this is an intro or conclusion.
Your presentation and structure are good.
The answer has necessary coverage and depth.
Good answer all in all.
Could use a diagram in geo-related questions to explain the concepts.
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Good use of the diagram but they should be better explained.
Intro is decent.
The main body is good with comprehensive points.
Content-wise the answer is decent.
Your presentation and structure are good.
Very good way forwards.
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Underline important points.
Diagram is not self explanatory. What is it trying to convey and how it related with the demand of the question?
Very good points in the 1st part.
Similarly, points in the 2nd part are also good.
Good way forwards.
Your presentation and structure are good.
The answer has necessary coverage and depth.
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The 2nd paragraph is one big statement!!! Avoid it!
Good intro.
The direction of your answer is good.
But you have to improve upon presenting them.
When writing in bullet points then try to give as many good points possible. Just a couple of statements are needed to explain them.
Write as many points as you know but write only 1-2 line about that point. It’s always better to cover more points than to write a few points in detail.
Good conclusion.
Work on the length of your statements
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Perfect use of an image in geo-related question!
Keep it up.
Underline your key points in the answer and also highlight your subheadings properly.
You have covered all the facets in a satisfactory manner.
The explanation is good.
The structure is near perfect.
Decent last part of the answer.
Optimistic and well-balanced conclusion.
Your command on the language is awesome
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