Mentor Comment-
- The question is about the concept of ethical due diligence, so in introduction we have to define what is diligence.
- In the body we have to discuss the concept of diligence. Then highlight its importance in civil services – why is it essential to profess due diligence? To what extent is it required by civil servants etc. Also discuss how to inculcate it
- We have to conclude with significance of diligence in civil services.
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Chester you need to work on spellings
in your answer ,rephrase needed in some points.
avoid using short forms like w.r.t.
underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
structure of answer is good but content could be better.
Do not demotivated by the marks,keep writing,you will improve !
Marks-3/10
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Hi NJ
your content is good but you have to work on presentation
and basic grammar.
Use relevant examples of various civil servants and personalities.
lackluster conclusion,it should be catchy
structure of answer is good
well diversified points.
underline only keywords.
good attempt,keep it up !
Marks-4/10
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction
You can also start the introduction with some quote.
You can diversify your answer by giving proper examples of various personalities.
For example-Gandhiji’s first hunger strike as an example of selfless diligence.
Conclusion is good.
The answer is according to the demand of the question.
Keep it up.
Marks-4/10