Mentor’s comment-
- In introduction,we have to briefly explain about Chatrapati Shivaji.
- In the body, briefly present his achievements – he increased the influence of the Maratha Empire from Deccan to Karnataka and gave it a place at the all India level, he built an efficient administrative system,set up an authentic revenue system for income and broadened the economic base of the empire through Chauth along with Sardeshmukhi, army based on cash payment etc. Then move on to discuss the factors that led to the fall of the Maratha empire.
- Conclude by reasserting the significance of his contributions in the Indian modern history
Please review the answer.
How battle of karnal ended maratha’s hegemony ?
when you are writing an answer of history,make sure the facts are right.
you have deviated from the demand of the question.
plan the structure before writing and give proper headings and sun-headings
read comprehensively to improve your content
lackluster introduction , introduction should be catchy.
conclude according to mentor’s comment,your conclusion is irrelevant.
work hard,you will improve.
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@Parth Verma: sir please review
NJ you need to work on basic grammar kike Marathas were not was etc..
content is good and diversified but lackluster introduction.
need to add main points of causes of downfall like treaty of salbai and 3rd battle of Panipat
Maratha administration was thoroughly autocratic,it was not based on habitual allegiance of the people etc.
read more comprehensively to enrich your content.
a good attempt ,keep writing
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction
You have attempted the answer in decent manner.
Well structured answer.
Also mention briefly the condition of Marathas after Shivaji.
Avoid cutting .
Overall a good attempt.
Keep writing.
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Hi Vishesh
Good presentation of tax system.
You can use subheadings under the heading-Reasons for fall,for better presentation.
Before conclusing,mention briefly the condition of Marathas after Shivaji to fetch extra marks.
Improve your handwriting.
Work on presentation also.
A decent attempt.
Keep it up.