Mentor’s comment
- In intro, explain in brief the concept of simple molecules as medicine and complex molecules as medicines.
- In the body, explain in detail why some diseases like cancer are difficult to treat and then explain in detail the working of biosimilar technique. And details like why it is difficult to produce and need of greater expertise in producing them can also be mentioned.
- Conclude by highlighting the future scope and promise the technology holds as a cure for cancer and other diseases.
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Teja good attempt but need to work on these things-
avoid using abbreviations like dept.
do not use capital alphabets (except for nouns)between the sentences.
avoid cutting the words in the answer.
In your answer way ahead is missing ,write way ahead in brief.
overall content is good but try to write introduction little catchy.
keep writing !
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Sunny attach your scanned copy with the help of attachment link given in the right side of comment box.
Please review the answer.
Dakshina you have deviated from the demand of question.
brainstorm before writing.
first part of your answer is good but second part (siddha, allopathy, ayurveda) is not relevant.
content needs to be improved as in characteristics you wrote very general points
lackluster introduction.
Persistency is the key to success,keep writing,you will improve.
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Sunny scan properly and upload it again, your answer sheet is not legible..
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have discussed the application part in a good manner.
Write some way forward or suggestions for better marks.
Briefly mention the future scope of biosimilars.
Avoid cutting this much,it creates negative impression.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer,it will help you.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Introduction is good.
Good use of flow charts.
You have explained the application part in a good manner .
Also write challenges and way forward to make your answer complete.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
Follow proper structure.
Improve handwriting.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing!