Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.civilsdaily.com/
news/law-to-deal-with- pandemics/ - https://www.theweek.in/news/
india/2020/04/26/covid-19-and- the-ambit-of-the-disaster- management-act.html - In the intro, you can mention the lockdown situation and why various legal provisions needed to be invoked.
- In the body, you can mention the Report of the Task Force to review the DM Act 2013 which pointed to the lack of preparedness, problems in the ground-level implementation of instructions, lack of grievance redressal etc. You can also mention as an example the countries like Singapore and the UK which have enacted specific laws or regulations.
- In conclusion, you can reaffirm the need for a specific law to deal effectively with the pandemic.
Please review the answer.
@Parth Verma please review the answer
Hi Dakshina
Work on basic grammar and rephrase your introduction.
Some good points but you can add more to fetch good marks like lack of grievance mechanism etc.
Write some suggestions also.
good conclusion.
Work on handwriting,it should be neat and legible.
Work hard,you will improve.
MOJO0206200D40884686
Try to write a catchy introduction
The main body of the answer is decently attempted.
Content is rich and well placed but
you could have mention the examples of various countries to diversify your answer.
Need to work upon presentation and language
Conclusion is missing,do not end your answer without concluding remarks
keep practicing !
Please review.
Hi Deepika
Lackluster introduction,mention the lockdown situation and why various legal provisions needed to be invoked.
You have discussed the body of the answer in a decent manner.
Also give examples of various countries as mentioned in the mentor’s comment.
Try to cover more verticals to get good marks.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.
Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028
Hi Parakh
Introduction should be catchy,write about the pandemic and why there is a need to invoke DM Act.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer.
Write about task force report and give examples of the various countries.
Brainstorm before writing.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
Do not get demotivated by marks.
Work hard,you will improve.