Mentor’s comment-
- In the intro, briefly explain what constitutional amendment is.
- In the body, compare the various provisions of article 5 of the U.S., in which either Federal government or the state can initiate the procedure, ratification by the 3/4 states and contrast this with India in which constitution can be amended in 3 ways, States cannot start the process for amendment, ratification by only half states even when ratification is required. Express your views with reason whether the flexibility in the process could have led to more number of amendments.
- Conclude by expressing the utility of the amendment procedure in keeping pace with the changing times.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Compare with similar points, if you are writing Article of India on one side, write similar Article of US.
Our most of the amendments are not trivial in nature, you are questioning the credibility of Parliament.
Work on content.
Write about the flexibility of Indian constitution and compare it with US constitution.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting and improve your presentation to get better marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Lackluster introduction, do not write what one can do, simply explain what do you mean by constitutional amendment.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better form.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Question is not asking whether the Indian constitution amendments are under judicial review or not, so do not waste your words and space in proving that.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
Read mentor’s comment before writing.
Work on grammar and avoid spelling mistakes.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have compared the constitutions in a decent manner.
Write the Article of Indian constitution also.
Good conclusion.
Content is good, well placed and according to the demand of the question.
Overall a decent attempt.
You have the potential,be persistent, you will succeed.
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Hi Dakshina
Do not write such complex introductions, keep it simple.
Simply write what do you mean by the constitutional amendment.
Instead of making different flow chart, do a simple comparison , you can make a table for that.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
The question is not asking all the features of constitution amendment, do the comparison only.
You have explained the flexibility part in a good manner.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting .
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi PSR
Good introduction.
Avoid using short forms like const, CA etc.
Read properly about the methods of amendments in Indian constitution, make sure your facts are right.
After citing the differences, express your views with reason whether the flexibility in the process could have led to more number of amendments.
Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you in writing good answers.
Then conclude.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Explain the differences in a proper manner, mention the Articles(also mentioned in the mentor’s comment).
The question is not asking the issues in the constitutional amendments , instead of it express your views with reason whether the flexibility in the process could have led to more number of amendments.
Adhere to the demand of the question.
Underline keywords.
Avoid spelling mistakes and improve your presentation, for example you can make a table for citing the differences.
Keep writing !
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Hi Amandeep
Lackluster introduction, first define what is constitutional amendment.
Work on your handwriting, write little small as space will be limited in the mains answer sheet.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Instead of writing procedures, explain the differences.
Also answer the second part of the question,express your views with reason whether the flexibility in the process could have led to more number of amendments.
Conclude by writing a balanced approach.
Work on content and structure.
Work hard,you will improve !
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Hi Sneha
First define what is constitutional amendment.
There is no need to write the procedures of constitutional amendments in such details.
Simply cite the differences between the two.
You have explained the flexibility part in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Do not write all you know about the topic, stick to the demand of the question, write crisp and concise.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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Hi Shubham
Do not directly write the differences, always write some introductory lines.
Adhere to the proper structure to get better marks.
You have compared both the constitution in a good manner.
Refrain from such long paragraphs, write in points or a mix of points and small paragraphs.
Give proper heading and subheadings.
Good conclusion.
Improve your handwriting.
A decent attempt, keep writing.
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Hi Teja
Good introduction.
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
You have explained the differences in a quite comprehensive manner.
Content is good and well placed.
Refrain from monotony, underline keywords to convince the examiner easily.
Avoid cutting .
There are spelling mistakes in your answer, work on it.
Good conclusion.
Be consistent, keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
First thing, work on your handwriting,avoid scribbling, differentiate between your ‘r’ and ‘e’ , write your ‘s’ properly.
Due to your handwriting, spelling mistakes are there.
Good introduction.
It is ‘India’ not ‘india’, required to ratified? work on basic grammar.
The content is good but work hard on presentation, avoid spelling mistakes .
Rephrase your conclusion.
Work hard , you will improve.