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- In the introduction mention the location and features of Sargasso Sea in brief.
- In the body explain the reasons behind formation of Sargasso Sea.Write about the Salinity of Sargasso Sea and the various factors responsible for its high salinity.
- Conclude with importance.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction, map diagram is appreciable.
Explain briefly the features of this sea.
You have explained the reasons of its formation in a decent manner.
Add more points in its significance ,you can write Sargassum provides a home to an amazing variety of marine species.
Adhere to word limit, try to complete your answer in maximum two pages.
Overall the content is good and well placed.
Avoid grammatical errors and improve your handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Taran
Content is fine but need to rephrase your introduction.
Work on content , write proper reasons for its formation.
Explain briefly some of its features.
Reasons for its high salinity are well explained.
Write some more points about its significance like commercial fish, such as tuna, and birds migrate through the Sargasso Sea and depend on it for food.
Work on handwriting and avoid grammatical errors.
Avoid using unnecessary grammatical errors in between of a sentence.
Keep writing !
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have explained the reasons of its formation and high salinity in a decent manner.
The content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Use capital and small alphabets wisely, avoid grammatical errors.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Explain some of its features like it is the only sea without a land boundary.
Thumbs up for the map.
Reasons are well explained .
Lackluster conclusion, explain the importance of the sea.
Except the conclusion , rest of the answer is decent.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sakshi
Good introduction.
You have explained the reasons for the formation and high salinity in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Need to work upon presentation of the answer to get better marks.
Underline keywords .
As this is a static question of geography, you can draw a map diagram .
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Uttam
Lackluster introduction, mention the location and features of Sargasso Sea in brief.
Reasons for its formation are decent, but instead of writing them in steps, write in points.
Plastic bottles are the not the cause of high salinity in the sea, instead – Prevention of mixing of fresh water from surrounding oceans and poles due to virtual boundary created by the ocean currents, Low wind conditions also prevent intermixing with fresh water, High temperature in the region owing to its subtropical location and very less cloud cover. This causes high evaporation, Gulf Stream brings in high salinity water to the sea .
Work on content .
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You can merge uniqueness and features under one heading, and explain the reasons behind formation of Sargasso Sea, as it is the main demand of the question.
Reasons for high salinity are well explained.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude with the importance of this sea.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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