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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/deepening-india- s-korea-ties/article32175582. ece - In the intro, mention the trade ties between the two countries.
- In the body mention the commonalities between the two countries like democracy, rich culture next mention the trade ties and scope for increasing the ties further, challenges both the countries faces in the form of aggressive China, in the factor responsible mention the people to people ties, support from the government, regulatory hurdle in for trade ties etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to build on the relationship.
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Hi Deepika
Lackluster introduction, you can write that India-South Korea relations have made rapid strides in recent years. With the convergence of India’s Act East Policy and South Korea’s New Southern Policy, there has been an acceleration of economic and strategic relations between the two countries.
You have explained the areas of convergence and areas of concern in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting, avoid scribbling.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction, also mention the historical overview of India-S.Korea ties.
In the areas of cooperation, your first point should be in the way forward.
Give proper examples like Swacch Bharat and the New Village Movement, Bollywood, K-pop and Korean Cuisine etc.
Work on content .
Need to add more points in the way forward, you can write that the two countries can develop synergies on Sustainable development goals (SDGs), trade agreements, and connectivity norms, and promoting institutions like the Indian Culture Centre (ICC) will also be a step in the right direction.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting .
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
You have covered the areas of convergence in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
You can also give examples of Swacch Bharat and the New Village Movement, Bollywood, K-pop and Korean Cuisine etc.
After writing the issues, give some way forward.
In this question you can write that the two countries can develop synergies on Sustainable development goals (SDGs), trade agreements, and connectivity norms, and promoting institutions like the Indian Culture Centre (ICC) will also be a step in the right direction.
Conclusion is good but try to summarise it.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
Need to rephrase your introduction.
You can make a flow chart for explaining the commonalities between the two countries, this will save you space as well as make your answer more presentable.
Along with the historic ties, write the current areas of cooperation, you can give examples like Swacch Bharat and the New Village Movement, Bollywood, K-pop and Korean Cuisine etc.
Way forward is good .
Conclusion is missing,conclude by mentioning the need to build on the relationship.
Leave proper space between lines.
Write neat and legible .
Avoid using short forms.
Keep working hard !
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