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- In the introduction write about the work culture of an organization.
- In the body explain the factors influencing the ethics of society at large. Define work culture . Explain with examples of how it impacts societal ethics. Discuss that Ethics form an essential part of the foundation on which a civilized society is built.
- Conclude by explaining that both society and the organization’s work culture have a direct correlation.
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have explained the work culture in a decent manner.
Implications are well explained.
Use of examples is appreciable.
Need to work on concluding remarks.
The content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers,keep writing, you will succeed.