Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction briefly narrate the meaning of the quote.
• In the body establish the context of the theme by supporting your stance with valid arguments. Introduce the concept of death of a body and inner voice and then explain the value of dreams and
  how we face challenges while achieving it because road to success in never easy but it is always rewarding. Explain why people give up under various situations be it professional life, love life, social life or just life in general. What are the causes behind it whether external or internal. How can an individual overcome those challenges?
• Conclude with the view that one must never give up. No matter how hard it is, no matter how much it takes out of you one should never give up on their dreams. Nothing is easy in life and if it easy it is not worth it.