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- In the introduction discuss in short the facts related to Guru Nanak.
- In the body explain in detail the philosophies propounded by him.
Then discuss that his teaching hold great value today in overcoming caste and religious discrimination, intolerance of other views, corruption, addiction of alcohol and drugs, clash of
civilizations, terrorism and other social evils. - Conclude that in a world that is increasingly fragmented with a narrow, tunnel vision, bigotry and dogmatism, we have to walk on the path shown to us by Nanak and other illustrious gurus to dispel
the darkness that constantly threatens to envelop individuals, communities and nations.
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Hi Jojo
In the introduction, also mention that he is the founder of Sikhism .
Mention the basic teachings of Guru Nanak like –
-Submission to the will of God (Waheguru)
-Goodwill for all
-Speaking truth
-Social Service
Try to cover different dimensions to fetch better marks.
You have explained the relevance in the current context in a good manner.
Work on conclusive remarks.
Improve your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Prabhat
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
In the teachings, you can also mention the five distinct ideals: dharam, gian, saram, karam and sach.
These types of points will help you in fetching better marks.
You have explained the relevance in the current context in a good manner.
Refrain from monotony, underline keywords and use subheadings if possible.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Arun
Good introduction.
Use of table in discussing the values and relevance is appreciable.
But try to work on presentation, write in straight lines.
Work on handwriting.
Work on conclusion, you can write that his teaching holds great value today in overcoming caste and religious discrimination, intolerance of other views, corruption, addiction of alcohol and drugs, clash of civilisations, terrorism and other social evils.
Avoid grammatical mistakes.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Bhairavi
Write on blank white sheet.
Good introduction.
Use of table in discussing the values and relevance is appreciable.
Content wise good attempt.
Underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt, keep writing!
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