Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction first define what you understand by land degradation.
• In the body emphasize on the fact that land is both an issue and a solution to global warming and the fact is that the relationship between land and climate change is becoming increasingly complex. Explain in detail the land-climate link. Quote data and reports to justify your stand. Discuss the complexities and challenges and suggest solutions to the same.
• Conclude with way forward.