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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- united-states-22-dialogue- jaishankar-mike-pompeo-china- 6887200/ - In the intro, mention how changes in geopolitical order and the corona pandemic has been reshaping the world order.
- In the body, discuss how India and U.S. relations have been deepening in the last few years through Quad and 2+2 dialogue etc.. In the next part, discuss the new factors that have accelerated this pace of bilateral and multilateral engagement like-pandemic, Chinese aggression, economic disruption.
- Conclude by mentioning the need carry forward the momentum in a growing relationship which would benefit both the countries.
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Hi Arun
Lackluster introduction, mention how changes in geopolitical order and the corona pandemic has been reshaping the world order.
‘Factors include’ what ? Give proper headings .
You can also write that factors responsible for rapid progress in the US-India ties –
1) Chinese aggression on northern border
2) Disruption caused by the corona pandemic
3) Focus on critical technologies
Substantiate these points.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Work on concluding remarks, conclude by mentioning the need carry forward the momentum in a growing relationship which would benefit both the countries.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing !
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