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- In the introduction briefly talk about the importance of the coming of pre-congress political organisations that evolved in 19th century.
- In the body, explain the important public associations, established before the Indian National Congress .
- Conclude with importance of these associations to the formation of congress at a later stage that played key role in the freedom struggle.
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Hi Krushna
First thing, scan your sheet properly.
Good introduction.
Instead of writing region wise, write the associations in chronology.
Also write about the shortcomings,you can write that they mainly questioned local issues and their members and leaders were also limited to one or adjoining provinces.
Underlibe keywords.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Arun
Good introdcution, but avoid writing short forms, for example instead of est write established.
Europeans powers were not the political organisations, you have to write about landholders Society,
Bengal British India Society etc.
Do not get deviated from the demand of the question.
Writing about mughals is not relevant here.
Simply write the shortcomings of these prominent political organisations like they mainly questioned local issues and their members and leaders were also limited to one or adjoining provinces.
Underline keywords.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing !
thank you sir for the feedback
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Name: Prashant
Email: prashant.kumar@alumni.iitd.ac.in
Hi Prashant
Good inroduction.
You have discussed the evolution of pre-congress organisations in a decent manner.
Write how the shortcomings of these organisations led to the development of INC.
You can write that these early Associations had, though, important contribution in terms of arousing the political will and demands of the Indian public, but their area and activities, were limited.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
You have discussed the pre-congress associations in a decent manner.
Write how the shortcomings of these organisations led to the development of INC.
You can write that these early Associations had, though, important contribution in terms of arousing the political will and demands of the Indian public, but their area and activities, were limited.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing.