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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/the-rise-of-the- ai-economy/article33282408.ece - In the body, briefly introduce AI.
- In the body, explain in detail the potential of AI in transforming the Indian economy by bringing changes in various sectors like agriculture, healthcare, education, smart cities, smart mobilities etc. In the initiatives by government mention the NITI Aayog’s national strategy for Ai.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for tapping the potential of AI for the future of the country.
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Hi Arun
First define what do you mean by AI. You can write that – Artificial Intelligence (AI) refers to the ability of machines to perform cognitive tasks like thinking, perceiving, learning, problem-solving and decision making.
Write some challenges like-
-Lack of broad-based expertise in research and application of AI.
-Absence of enabling data ecosystems – access to intelligent data.
– High resource cost and low awareness for adoption of AI.
Suggested strategy is good.
Try to cover different dimensions to fetch better marks.
Good conclusion, do not put a star mark in conclusion.
Keep writing.
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Hi Neeraj
Good introduction.
Briefly mention some challenges in the developmen of AI.
You can write like-
-Lack of broad-based expertise in research and application of AI.
-Absence of enabling data ecosystems – access to intelligent data.
– High resource cost and low awareness for adoption of AI.
Significance and suggested strategy are discussed in a decent manner.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing.
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Hi Vaishnavi
Answer is well started.
Briefly mention some challenges in the developmen of AI.
You can write like-
-Lack of broad-based expertise in research and application of AI.
-Absence of enabling data ecosystems – access to intelligent data.
– High resource cost and low awareness for adoption of AI.
Significance and suggested strategy are discussed in a decent manner.
In the measures, you can also add that the Commerce and Industry Ministry has also set up task forces to explore the use of AI and Big Data technologies in the country.
A decent attempt.
Work hard, you will succeed.