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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/editorials/ pradeep-gyawali-nepal-k-p-oli- 7150473/ - In the intro, mention the close ties between the two nations.
- In the body, mention various factors introducing friction between the two nations- border issue, India’s perceived interference in the internal matters of Nepal, rising nationalist feeling in Nepal, use of anti-India feeling in Nepal for political gains, Nepal’s increasing closeness with China etc. In the measures mention need to resolve border issue through dialogue, recognising Nepali aspiration for creating own identity in geopolitics, avoiding interference in politics of Nepal such as Madhesi protest etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for recognition of each other’s importance in both the countries.
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Hi RR
Good intro.
Factors for friction are discussed in a good manner, try to make a map diagram as well.
Goos suggested strategy, also mention that India should also try to convey to Nepal’s leadership about the congenial and friendly environment that 6 to 8 million Nepali citizens living in India enjoy.
Therefore, Any thoughtless erosion of this centuries old togetherness may prove difficult for both countries.
Overall good content.
You have potential of writing good answers, keep working hard.
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Hi Sandeep
Good intro.
Factors for friction are discussed in a good manner, try to make a map diagram as well.
In the suggestions , along with other points, you can write that India must not delay dealing with the matter, and at a time when it already has a faceoff with China in Ladakh and Sikkim.
Since the free movement of people is permitted across the border, Nepal enjoys immense strategic relevance from India’s national security point of view, as terrorists often use Nepal to enter India.
Therefore, stable and friendly relations with Nepal is one of prerequisites which India can’t afford to overlook.
Use subheadings for better presentation,
Keep writing.
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HI SRP
Good intro.
In these type of border issues questions, you can make a map diagram to substantiate your answer better.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner.
In the suggestions, write that the existing bilateral treaties between India and Nepal have not taken the shifting of Himalayan rivers into consideration. A primary reason for this is the lack of an approach where ecological concerns and needs of rivers are often discussed. Therefore, India and Nepal should try to resolve the boundary dispute by taking into account all shared environmental characteristics.
Cover multiple dimensions to fetch better marks.
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Hi KG
Good intro.
In these type of border issues questions, you can make a map diagram to substantiate your answer better.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner.
In the suggestions, write that the existing bilateral treaties between India and Nepal have not taken the shifting of Himalayan rivers into consideration. A primary reason for this is the lack of an approach where ecological concerns and needs of rivers are often discussed. Therefore, India and Nepal should try to resolve the boundary dispute by taking into account all shared environmental characteristics.
Overall good content and strucuture.
Keep writing.
Hi Jaya
Good intro.
Try to make a map diagram in these type of border issues question.
You have discussed the challenges in a decent manner.
In the suggestions , along with other points , write that since the free movement of people is permitted across the border, Nepal enjoys immense strategic relevance from India’s national security point of view, as terrorists often use Nepal to enter India. Therefore, stable and friendly relations with Nepal is one of prerequisites which India can’t afford to overlook.
Good conclusion.
Refrain from monotony, underline keywords.