Mentor’s comment-
- Start by defining what social control and socialization are.
- In the body explain that social control and socialization are closely related to each other. As a matter of fact, societies depend heavily upon effective socialization to internalize social norms
and values as the individual’s guides and motives to action. Through socialization societies aim to control the behavior of its members subconsciously. - Conclude with a fair and balanced opinion on the fact in the question.
@Parth
please review.
Hi Surya
Answer is well started.
After the introduction , try to give a heading. In this , you can write – Relationship between the demographic dividend and the human capital quality.
In the measures, also mention – Equally important focus on elderly people to make use of their wisdom and experience.
Work on presentation, use proepr headings and subheadings.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
Plz review on answer
Hi Jyoti
Answer is well started.
Fragement your content under two headings-
1. Relationship between the demographic dividend and the human capital quality.
2. Way forward.
Content wise good attempt but need to work on structure.
Underline keywords.
Avoid spelling errors.
Keep writing.