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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/psbs-must-focus- on-good-banking/2218898/ - In the intro, mention the difference in the NPA figures of the PSBs and the private banks.
- In the body, mention various factors that lead to below-par performance such as political interference, social obligations, lack of productivity, government’s interference etc. In the suggestions mention tightening credit discipline, fast-tracking technology infrastructure to improve customer experience, nurturing enabling environment etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to make these changes to improve the performance of the PSBs.
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Hi Komal
Good intro but club in one paragrah or summarise it.
Factors are discussed in a good manner,
Avoid bullet points like problem of NPA- substantiate in 1-2 lines .
Thumbs up for the suggestions.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Be persistent and keep writing.
@Parth
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Hi Deepika
Good intro.
Factors are discussed in a decent manner, you can take a clue from komal’s answer to have more detailed suggestions.
For 10 marker, your answer is good.
Give subheadings .
Good structure.
Keep working hard.