Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, mention the important role of urban cities in light of growing population.
- In the body, give brief overview of the urbanization process in India. Then, mention the challenges involved.
- Discuss the need for spatial transformation and mention some major transformations that are required.Also, emphasize the role of proper planning in transforming Indian cities.
- Conclude with a forward looking statement.
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Muskan,
Nice attempt.
You have the necessary knowledge to answer this question.
You have tried to cover all the parts of the question.
Very good that you have added COVID issue in the answer. That’s a value addition to the answer.
Discuss in detail the spatial challenges associated with urbanisation.
Problem of slum, parking issues, crowded markets, narrow streets.
Then suggest new planning which can help overcome these issues.
Focus more on spatial challenges.
Read the question very carefully and identify the keywords. It will help to make your answer specific.
You knowledge is good.
Keep writing.