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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/towards-a-more- humane-police-force/ article36169474.ece - In the intro, mention the recent comment by the CJI about the threat to human rights in police stations.
- In the body, mention the steps taken such as installations of CCTV and incorporation guidelines in CrPC as laid down in the D.K. Basu v. State of West Bengal (1996) by the Supreme Court, linking of police modernisation scheme by the Centre to police reforms etc. In the measures suggest, reducing the number of arrests, separation of investigation wing from law and order wing of police etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the improvement in the situation while the need for doing more still exists.
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Muskan,
Very good attempt. The answer covers all the major dimensions. Structure flow and presentation is good. Introduction is relevant and good that you have related it to present context.
The mention of judgements and Supreme Court guidelines is nice.
Make way forward a bit concise.
Overall a very good answer.
Keep writing.
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Manisha,
Very good answer.
You have answered the demand of the question.
All the major dimensions are covered.
Presentation and structure is good.
Content wise answer is satisfactory.
Keep writing.
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Sehaj,
Very good answer.
You have good knowledge of the topic.
Structure and presentation is good.
You have used various dimensions in the answer.
In the introduction part try to relate with present context.
Keep writing.
Doubt: It is a good practice to include current events in the answer without showing any political bias.
Please review.
Harshit,
Good attempt.
The introduction is a bit harsh. Try to avoid extreme statements particularly in introduction part.
Structure and presentation is good.
You have good command over the topic.
All the major dimensions are covered.
Keep writing.