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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/the-anatomy-of- indias-ukraine-dilemma/ article65090424.ece - In the intro, mention the damage caused by cybercrimes to the global economy.
- In the body, mention the reasons for reluctance such as the impact on the reputation of the company and poor performance in the share markets. In the possible solutions mention the regular audits of the firms, certification and evaluation of the security, cyber security command centres etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for proactive measures to mitigate the threat of cybercrimes and resulting disruption.
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Karun
Good attempt.
You have covered all parts of the question well. Introduction, conclusion are fine. Content is also good.
In reasons, you can add something like added cost of development of cyber security architecture.
Way forward is fine, some more steps taken by govt can be integrated.
Keep practicing. You are writing well. 🙂