Karun

Good attempt.
Content is fine, structure of the answer is also good.
Introduction is well-written.
Changes mentioned are good, however most of the marriages are still patri-local(can mention that in continuity). Further you can talk about changing goals of marriage, increasing age, easier dissolution etc.
Elements of continuity is fine, however, domestic violence was always an evil, not a prevalent practice-you can avoid giving it prominence.
Social stigma with divorce and widow remarriage still there, females taking most of the responsibility of household work can be written.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂

5.5/10