Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine.
Content is also fine, you can also talk about the role of media in creating prejudice.
Further, you can use examples of historical laws like Criminal Tribes Act against nomadic and semi-nomadic tribes.. Different value systems of different cultures can also aid in creating prejudices which can be mentioned.. Point no. 4 is not clear, social contract theory is usually between people and the state for the creation of a state, your explanation is something different..
Conclusion is fine. 1-2 lines before that mentioning a brief way forward for creating a prejudice-free society can be mentioned.
Keep practicing. 🙂
Introduction is fine.
In first point in the body, rather than attitude you can talk about the value-system. Here, you can also mention the role of traditions and customs in different value-systems.
Next, the answer is quite uni-dimensional mostly talking about religious prejudice, you can use one point for that, next, talk about prejudices stemming from other things too such as role of media/social media, historical laws like Criminal Tribes Act against nomadic and semi-nomadic tribes, theories of racial superiority etc
Conclusion is decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Sushant
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine.
Content is also fine, you can also talk about the role of media in creating prejudice.
Further, you can use examples of historical laws like Criminal Tribes Act against nomadic and semi-nomadic tribes.. Different value systems of different cultures can also aid in creating prejudices which can be mentioned.. Point no. 4 is not clear, social contract theory is usually between people and the state for the creation of a state, your explanation is something different..
Conclusion is fine. 1-2 lines before that mentioning a brief way forward for creating a prejudice-free society can be mentioned.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Hello
Introduction is fine.
In first point in the body, rather than attitude you can talk about the value-system. Here, you can also mention the role of traditions and customs in different value-systems.
Next, the answer is quite uni-dimensional mostly talking about religious prejudice, you can use one point for that, next, talk about prejudices stemming from other things too such as role of media/social media, historical laws like Criminal Tribes Act against nomadic and semi-nomadic tribes, theories of racial superiority etc
Conclusion is decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂