Mentor’s Comments-
- Give a brief introduction on universal social protection.
- Mention its impact on individual resilience.
- Also, highlight its impact on the resilience of the economy.
- State the challenges in adopting universal social protection in India.
- Conclude accordingly.
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Akshada
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine, after that no need to list down so many schemes. You can mention 1-2 as examples just after intro. Also, all of them are not ‘universal’ for example DBT is not for all, Ayushman Bharat is based on SECC, Antyoday is for poorest of the poor etc
Next two parts are quite good, you have mentioned the impacts on resilience by both the individual and economy quite comprehensively.
After that, mention some of the challenges of universal social protection – heterogeneous nature of vulnerabilities (one size fits all approach may not be successful), fiscal burden on govt, implementation challenges etc
In questions asking to discuss, both sides should be touched upon.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
7.5/15
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Chandan
Decent attempt.
Structuring of the answer is good. Content is fine too.
In intro, other than insurance against emergency you can mention general role of USP in eliminating poverty.
Next part about aid in individual resilience is good. Mention of vulnerable sections including women and their empowerment could be mentioned in a separate point.
In next part, your knowledge is good but presentation can be improved. It looks quite haphazard.
Challenges mentioned are also fine, heterogeneous nature of vulnerabilities (one size fits all approach may not be successful) and issues in implementation could be additionally mentioned.
Conclusion is okay.
Keep practicing. 🙂
7.5/15
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Hello
In introduction, first mention what do you understand by universal social protection. Then, by mentioning the data you can emphasize upon its need.
Next part about individual resilience is fine, some good points have been mentioned. Mention of vulnerable sections including women and their empowerment could be mentioned in a separate point.
Economic resilience part is also fine, savings-demand- investment could be explained through a flowchart for better visibility.
In challenges, one of the most important issues is the fiscal burden which should be mentioned. Heterogeneous nature of vulnerabilities (one size fits all approach may not be successful) could also be talked about.
Conclusion is decent. You can talk about implementation on a pilot basis(gradual implementation).
Keep practicing. 🙂