Mentor’s Comments-
- https://www.business-standard.com/article/opinion/reducing-air-pollution-stubble-burning-needs-economic-solutions-122092001362_1.html
- Define stubble burning in the introduction along with briefly mentioning some of its negative effects.
- List down the steps taken by the government to prevent stubble burning.
- Suggest a way forward,
- Conclude on an optimistic note.
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Vishwendra
Good attempt.
Introduction is fine. Mentioning the regions affected and why it is so much in news can give a context to the answer.
Next, since this is a 10 marker and the topic is quite extensive, so you can’t write everything. No need to mention cause- not asked.
Just mention the effects briefly and move on to government steps and way forward.
In government steps, you can divide into parts such as statutory efforts; technological efforts; recommendations of committees etc for better presentation. However, you have covered the points which is good. When talking about machinery, you can mention happy-seeders and rotavators etc.
Some of the ex-situ methods such as usage in biomass power projects, feedstock for 2G ethanol etc can also be mentioned.
Way forward and conclusion are fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂