Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly present the key details of the case study.
- In the body one must present arguments in favor of not keeping quiet such as – deficits of ‘Business without
morality’, need to be a conscience citizen, questions of integrity involved. Suggest a course of action to take the corrective measures for the situation – Moral persuasion, need
for her to preserve integrity and walk with high morality and business ethics. - Conclude with suitable middle path that satisfies all the issues and concerns in the question.
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Hi Deepika
Rephrase your introductory lines,the aim of the question is to solve the case study which is based on the premise of business ethics and morality involved therein so write in accordance.
In steps, you have written good points but also add points like this that take the assistance of the local NGO as well as media to create pressure on the company as well other big industries working on similar lines.
Focus on negative externalities of modern day industrialization.
Good concluding remarks.
Keep writing!
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Hi
Rewrite your introduction.
Avoid grammatical errors and spelling mistakes like it is quiet not quite.
Course of action is good.
Also focus on negative externalities of modern day
industrialization on environment and people living around the industry premises.
You can conclude that there is high risk of losing the job so what are the options left for her,one can be looking for a new job.
While while case studies,think broader.
A decent attempt,keep writing !
@Parth Verma.
Is it necessary to write ethical jargons(terms) as done in part A of this answer
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Hi Dakshina
Introductory lines are good.
Mention something about business without morality.
Moral persuasion should be the first step.
Also the residents of the villages must be made aware about their right to life which includes a
healthy life.
Do not get so aggressive from the very beginning.
Brainstorm before writing.
Concluding lines are good.
Keep writing.
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Hi Chester
Staying quiet not quite, work on spellings.
In the introduction briefly present the key details of the case study then move forward.
Diverse your steps, like you can contact a local NGO or file a PIL on behalf of the villagers , you can also inform the district administration of the same wrongdoing and seek their help.
Think course of action in a broader sense.
Work on basic grammar.
Underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Keep writing.
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