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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/quad- summit-india-china-relations- brics-nations-7229861/ - In the intro, mention India’s contradictory membership of BRICS and the Quad.
- In the body, mention the few elements of transformation hostile China on border and U.S’s support, China raising Kashmir issue at the UNSC and U.S. support to block China, U.S. put pressure on Pakistan on cross-border terrorism while China protects Pakistan etc.
- Conclude by mentioning that the transformation does not mean that India’s will walk away from the BRICS.
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Hi Divya
Good intro.
After the intro, give heading- Reasons of China’s aggression , do not write a question in an answer.
Rest of the answer is well written.
Conclude briefly, not in a long paragraph.
Leave spaces between the headings.
You can also use a map diagram in this question.
Good structure.