Mentor’s comment-
- In the intro, you can mention the backdrop of souring relations between the two countries and the disruption faced by the world in pandemic due to China’s dominance in the supply chains.
- In the body, you can mention the types of product that India imports form China and what difficulty India could face in searching for its alternate source. Next could be the cost and legal hurdles. In suggestions, you can mention the long term policy and vision for technological advancement through higher expenditure on R&D, acquisition of technology from other countries can be mentioned.
- Conclude by the necessity of reducing the dependence on China for security, strategic and economic angles.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
you have explained the challenges part in a decent manner.
but also explain briefly what are the key factors to attracting investments in Indialike labor reforms,skill ,infrastructure etc.
Try to cover more aspects.
You can also mention how significant is RCEP in this context to reduce dependence on China.
Avoid scribbling,work on handwriting.
Good conclusion.
Overall good attempt.
Keep writing.
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Make sure your facts are right,Galwan valley incident happened between India and China not Pakistan.
Challenges part is good.
Also mention the cost and legal hurdles to find new country as a source.
Well structured answer.
Content is also there.
Adhere to word limit.
A decent attempt.
Keep it up.
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Hi Vishesh
Good introduction.
The body of the answer is attempted in a decent way.
Well structured answer.
You can also mention the significance of RCEP in this context.
Also mention the cost and legal hurdles in finding China’s alternative.
Conclusion is good.
Improve your handwriting,write neat and legible.
Work on presentation to fetch extra marks.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep it up.
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Hi Venkatesh
Lackluster introduction.
Brainstorm before writing.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
Question is demanding that India should reduce our dependence on China and what difficulty India could face in searching for its alternate source.
Also mention some suggestions and measures to attracting investments in India like labor reforms,skill ,infrastructure etc.
You need to work on your basic grammar and avoid spelling mistakes.
Enrich and diversify your content.
Do not get demotivated by the marks.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester.
First of all scan properly.
Good introduction.
Well structured answer.
Content is diversified but
In the body,also mention the legal and cost hurdles that will come in the way of India in finding China’s alternative.
You can also explain the significance of ASEAN and RCEP in this context to diversify your answer.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Conclusion is good.
A good attempt.
Keep it up.
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Hi Teja
Rephrase your introduction.
You have discussed the challenges and solution part in a decent manner.
Some good points but need to touch more verticals like how we can attract investments to India ,the alternate source if we reduce our dependence on China and significance of RCEP etc.
Conclusion is good.
Work on basic grammar.
Avoid these type of subheadings- India economy hurts.
A decent attempt,but there is a scope of improvement.
Work hard,keep writing!
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction.
Explain briefly the disruption faced by the world in pandemic due to China’s dominance in the supply chains.
Good use of flow chart.
Instead of discussing the body under one heading,try to use subheadings for better presentation of the answer.
Also mention what India can do to attract investments and what will be the legal and cost hurdles if we substitute China.
Good conclusion.
Write in straight lines.
Avoid scribbling.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Rephrase your introduction.
Good use of diagram,keep it up !
You have mentioned the challenges in a good manner.
Also add the cost obstacles if we reduce our dependence on China.
Measures to be taken are decent and in accordance to the demand of the question.
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A good answer,keep it up.
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Hi Sneha
This is a 10 marker question so adhere to the word limit.
Good conclusion
Your content is well diversified.
You just need to write crisp and concise and in accordance with the given word limit.
Diversify supply chain is a very good point,keep it up.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep it up.
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