Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- diwali-pollution-air-quality- 7052739/ - In the intro, mention the worsening problem of air pollution and how it grabs attention in winter.
- In the body, suggest the strategies like gradually replacing the technologies used in the power plants, as cooking fire is largest contributor replacing it with the LPG connection could benefit significantly, taxing polluting activities and subsidising cleaner sources, giving more powers to regulatory authority could help.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for increasing scientific and technological capacities to deal more effectively with the problem of pollution.
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