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- In the introduction one must briefly explain the case study.
- In the body state the nature of the ethical issue you’ve initially spotted. List the relevant facts. Identify
stakeholders, clarify the underlying values and consider consequences.
Develop a list of potential responses, choose the best option. - Conclude by what could be done in the future to prevent the problem.
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One important element you missed to discuss in the 1st part is the threat of nationwide protest. That is an important element here.
The suggestions lack depth and maturity here. First, you should talk to cadets and listen to their grievances. Try to establish a dialogue with them in order to stop nationwide protests.
Secondly, take their issues and memorandum with relevant stakeholders and see their opinion.
In all this process, always keep the lines of communication open, formally and informally.
Try to reason out these cadets regarding government policies and intentions and take a balanced approach on why and why not a quota for them is a good idea. Instead, you can suggest some additional merit points for NCC cadets in various exams so that they can make up for the loss in other fields.
Most of your points in the 1st part are repetitive and try not to copy the question points. Frame your own statements.
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Your overall approach is decent and well suited for the demand of the question.
But do mention one important aspect which is opening a channel of communication with cadets so that there is a two-way dialogue and larger issues could be identified.
The balance in the answer is perfect and you have covered basically all the major elements here.
Good presentation Deepika.
Well done.
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One more ethical issue: Nationwide Protests
A very detailed and step by step discussion in the 2nd part of the answer.
Well done for that.
You kept the answer in the realm of ethics and never veered away from it.
Decent coverage.
But the major aspect here is the technical language that you used overall and the admin tools that you suggested were relevant and necessary.
Keep it up.
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One more ethical issue: Nationwide Protests
Well, they can protest Dakshina and they have been protesting in the near past! So don’t write factually incorrect statements.
Apart from that, give the pros and cons of each step that you can take as the Secretary DoPT. Also include maintaining contact with these cadets in order to understand the larger picture and their varied grievances for their overall betterment.
Involve all the stakeholders here so that a general consensus is formed.
Your understanding of the case is decent. It is just multiple dimensions are missing here.
Kindly review