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- In the introduction start by talking about social media, how it has grown fast into our society impacting millions of lives.
- In the body discuss the lacunae present in our society that have contributed to the rise of social media; effect of globalisation, differential impact on women, generational gap that is ever widening etc. Explain then how should be social media ideally used. Suggest what needs to be done to overcome these challenges and make social media more advantageous.
- Conclude with solutions to address the issues posed by it.
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Hi KG
Good introduction.Quoting report data is apprecible.
You have covered multiple dimesions is appreciable.
Thumbs up for content.
Good attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep working hard.