Answer
Laws alone are not enough to promote ethical behavior. The reasons being –
- Laws can never be so exhaustive to cover each and every scenario possible. Hence, there will always be scope for discretion. In such scenarios, ethical behavior should come from within.
- There are many scenarios where laws cannot exist. Eg. We cannot have strict laws to scrutinize every small act of corruption.
- Even with laws, some unethical practices continue to exist. Eg. laws for violence against women have existed for ages. But that hasn’t caused such acts to end.
It is true that if a society was ethical, then we would not require laws acting as external checks. But such is a hypothetical scenario. Laws and ethics have their own unique position. Both are equally important and go hand in hand.
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Near perfect content.
The presentation style is well suited for this question.
Keep it up.
The content is fantastic and examples quoted are apt.
Overall, good presentation and structure.
Keep it up
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Avoid large paragraphs.
They make the content redundant and monotonous.
Use subheadings in your answers. They give clarity to the direction of your content.
The overall content of the answer is very good.
You have covered all the necessary arguments.
The language is lucid and easy.
Good examples of laws.
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Very good intro and the 1st part of the answer.
Highlight your subheadings prominently.
The overall content is satisfactory.
Very good use of the examples. They will fetch you good marks.
You can use different styles of presentation in order to break the monotonicity of the points.
Use diagrams, flowcharts, boxes or tables in your answers to break the mood!
Overall, decent attempt
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Very good use of the flowchart and diagrams.
But the content needs more depth and points.
You have to explain more about the relations between laws and ethical behavior.
The examples towards the end are very good.
Good conclusion
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Hi Hitesh
Welcome to the AWE Program
The overall content is decent.
Good use of examples.
But try to write in smaller paragraphs.
They have to be short and crisp to make the relevant effect.
Work on your presentation.
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Please do not write in these long paragraph format.
You will not gain the expected marks in this style of presentation.
Your example is good but it is overexplained.
Similarly, the main body of the answer suffers from a big paragraph and over-explanation.
But try to write in smaller paragraphs.
They have to be short and crisp to make the relevant effect.
Work on your presentation.
The direction of the content is decent.
Sorry sir for my same repeated mistakes regarding intro and smaller paragraphs. But i had changed my writting style ……. I think you will find same mistakes till 6th nov daily awe because i saw my first time answer review on that day. I realised that my way of wriitng since few days was not right…… I have already rectified myself and with your future valuable reviews i know i can write much better from now…
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The discussion is good.
The points and their explanations are on the expected lines.
The relationship between ethical behavior and laws are well established.
But try to write smaller statements to make points more effective.
The conclusion is missing.
greetings
sir,you are doing great job but this is not what i expected before joining this program. earlier i used to do answer practice on Insightsonindia there i used to check my own answers from others copy or from the model answer which was very time consuming, here also need to do the same. you please provide some examples also about the fault in my answer for example-to write smaller statements, where should i do that and how, what can i exclude from my answer to make them smaller. And do provide 1-2 extra points that would retain for long.
Thank you
Hi Deepanshu
Sure, buddy. Don’t worry.
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Thank you.
Very good intro.
Very good answer in terms of the content and explanation.
Your linkage between laws and ethical behavior is apt.
Good use of examples.
But do work on your presentation style.
The content and the structure should be seamless and it should not come out looking fractured.
Work on your writing skills.
Good conclusion
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Decent use of example.
But the content needs more depth and points.
You have to explain more about the relations between laws and ethical behavior.
The example towards the end is very good.
Good conclusion.
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Underline important stuff in your answer.
You have to explain more about the relations between laws and ethical behavior.
The answer lacks depth in the discussion.
The examples quoted are very good.
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What are the limitations of laws affecting ethical behavior in a positive manner?
Give that angle too. Because the first couple of words of the question are “are laws enough…..”
Apart from that, good examples and content.
Language is decent and presentation apt
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Very good answer.
The content is very good and the link of ethical behavior and laws has been established in a lucid manner.
Both sides of the argument are well presented.
But two suggestions here:
Avoid large statements.
Underline imp points
Good use of examples
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Very good attempt.
The language is perfect for the ethics answer.
The discussion is apt and balanced.
Very good use of examples.
The structure is superb.
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Hi Yogesh
Welcome back to the AWE Program
Please upload images in portrait mode because reading in landscape mode is difficult on the computer.
Do not cut your statements and words so frequently. This shows the indecisiveness on your part. Think properly before writing anything. Otherwise, this will harm your prospects in the real exam.
The question is not about the importance of ethical behavior. Your second part of the answer is discussing why we should preach ethical behavior.
Read the question carefully.
The main demand of the question is this:
Can only Law promote ethical behavior? If no, then what more needs to done apart from holding laws. Also, what is the mutual relationship between laws and ethical behavior? Give both arguments.