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- In the intro, mention the objectives of Atmanirbhar Bharat.
- In the body, discuss how the objective of pursuing self-sufficiency is different from turning protectionist. In the next part mention how export is essential for the development of the country and how it also involves import. Next, mention the reasons to avoid protectionist policies.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to keep the economy open as it seeks to be Atmanirbhar.
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Hi Theertha
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Good introduction.
You have differentiate the two things in a good manner.
Substantiate your bullet points about criticism of protectionism in one or two lines each.
Work on space management.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical mistakes.
Improve the presentation of the answer to fetch better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Divya
Do not write introduction in two paragraphs.
You have differentiate the two things in a good manner.
Content wise good attempt.
Thumbs up for the structure.
Good conclusion.
Adhere to word limit, you have written the answer as it is of 15 marks.
Summarise your content according to the demand of the question and you are good to go.
Keep working hard, you will succeed !
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