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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/skill- india-for-atmanirbhar-bharat- m-venkaiah-naidu-6505990/ - In the intro, briefly introduce the Atmanirbhar Bharat Abhiyan.
- In the body, specify the twin objectives like the short term and long term objectives, in the next part of the answer mention the three steps- like local to local, reducing imports gradually and producing globally competitive products.
- Conclude by highlighting the potential of Abhiyan in setting India’s economy on a truly self-reliant path.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Instead of using word ‘strategy’ in the heading, use ‘opportunities’.
Need to add more points in the challenges, you can write-
-Lack of backward and forward linkages.
-Burgeoning fiscal deficit
-Difficulty in mobilizing finances:
-Issues related to liquidity.
Way forward is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Shubham
First thing, adhere to word limit, try to complete your answer in maximum two pages.
Good introduction.
You have written the objectives in a good manner.
The issues are missing, write the associated challenges like –
-Lack of backward and forward linkages.
-Burgeoning fiscal deficit
-Difficulty in mobilizing finances:
-Issues related to liquidity.
Way forward id well explained.
Good conclusion.
Except the challenges, the content is good and well placed.
Keep writing !
OK, Sir!
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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
Insulating India from any future global economic downturn, by making it robust in the long run is the long run objective.
Write the opportunities and challenges associated with the Abhiyaan,.
Then write some way forward, you can write points like the private sector must massively step up investments R&D and PSUs too need to modernise in terms of technology.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by highlighting the potential of Abhiyan in setting India’s economy on a truly self-reliant path.
Work on content and follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Work hard.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You have explained the objectives in a good manner but them under ‘long term’ and ‘short term’ subheadings.
The way in which this Abhiyaan will revive the Indian economy is well explained by you, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good answer.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
You have the potential of writing good answers, be persistent and keep writing !
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Hi Dakhsina
Lackluster conclusion, do not write the strategy in the introduction, instead briefly introduce the Atmanirbhar Bharat Abhiyaan.
Objectives are well explained through the flow chart.
You need to work upon your headings, give proper headings, ‘investment needs’, ‘the manufacturer’ are not good headings.
Strategy is explained in a decent manner.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Avoid grammatical errors and improve handwriting.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Parakh
Lackluster introduction, do not write the objectives of the Abhiyaan , instead briefly introduce it.
Objectives are well explained.
First you have written the ways then concern, do it vice-versa, follow a proper structure to get better marks.
The content is good but put it in a proper format.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by highlighting the potential of Abhiyan in setting India’s economy on a truly self-reliant path.
Improve your handwriting.
Work hard, keep writing.
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Hi Amandeep
Good introduction.
Write the objectives under different subheadings for better structure.
Lack of content , write about the ‘Local to glocal’, reducing imports and making globally competitive products as the way forward to revive the economy under this Abhiyaan.
Always end your answer with some concluding remarks, conclude by highlighting the potential of Abhiyan in setting India’s economy on a truly self-reliant path.
Work on content.
Improve your handwriting and underline keywords.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Uttam
Good introduction.
You have explained the objectives in a decent manner.
In the revival of economy, write the main components- vocal for local and making globally competitive products for reducing imports and increasing exports.
Also mention that the private sector must massively step up investments R&D and PSUs too need to modernise in terms of technology.
Need to work upon content.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by highlighting the potential of Abhiyaan in setting India’s economy on a truly self-reliant path.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi PS
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
You have explained the objectives in a good manner.
The strategy of reviving the economy through this Abhiyaan is well explained, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Overall a decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing !
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Hi Aastha
Good introduction.
You have explained the objectives in a good manner.
‘the strategy’ for what ? Give headings properly.
The strategy of reviving the economy through this Abhiyaan is well explained.
Good conclusion.
Quoting Gandhiji is appreciable.
The content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
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Keep writing.
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Hi Unnati
Need to rephrase your introduction.
Instead of writing two lines, simply give a heading, it will make your answer better structured and will save you some words also.
You have met the demand of the answer in a decent manner.
Work on space management, for example there was no space left for conclusion, so write crisp and concise .
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting, avoid scribbling.
Keep writing, you will succeed.