Budget 2019 seems to be a budget for the masses as the government has announced several relief measures for farmers, informal workers and other marginalized communities. Critically analyze. (200 W)
Hi Divya,
-Nice introductory line…but avoid saying ‘I would like to quote’…quote should directly be mentioned…
-Points mentioned are good and arranged…
-However, conclusion could have been better…here we need to praise the initiatives with their utilitarian principles…The rest is good..
Overall, nice attempt…well written answer…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5
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Hi Divya,
-Nice introductory line…but avoid saying ‘I would like to quote’…quote should directly be mentioned…
-Points mentioned are good and arranged…
-However, conclusion could have been better…here we need to praise the initiatives with their utilitarian principles…The rest is good..
Overall, nice attempt…well written answer…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5