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- The question is straightforward and demands whether establishing manufacturing units in the area where the resources which are used as a raw material are available will result in increased employment.
- In the introduction explain what resource-based manufacturing means.
- In the body, explain how the proximity between the resources and the procession units would help create employment opportunities in the region.
- The factors that could be elaborated are- cost-cutting due to proximity between the resource of raw material and the manufacturing unit, expertise- expertise could be developed in the region itself in the field of manufacturing which would help create more employment, supply chain- development of supply chain in the area creates more employment opportunities.
- In conclusion, stress the need for the resource-based manufacturing approach to increase employment.
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Link the topic of discussion in the intro.
The main body of the answer has good content.
The examples quoted are ample and apt.
Good language.
The presentation is decent.
The direction is well coursed.
All in all decent attempt
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The only issue in the answer is that you overstretched the answer by one page.
The demand for the question is of 10 marks hence your content should reflect that.
The direction of the answer is decent.
But avoid giving more than 3-4 bullet points in each subheading in 10 marks questions.
The content should be curtailed in terms of explanation.
Use a short and crisp explanation.
To make the structure better, discuss the steps taken by the government in flowcharts.
No need to explain these initiatives.
The language is decent.
Good content.
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Good intro.
The discussion is a little off balance because you have not covered the issues with the regional resource-based manufacturing in the 2nd part of the answer.
The 1st part is well handled in terms of the depth of the content.
Keep your bullet points crisp.
Try to give only 3-4 bullet points in each subheading in 10 marks questions.
The conclusion is perfect
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A good answer.
It is short and crisp.
Could use a better presentation techniques.
The balance is quite good in both parts of the main body.
It is fine that you mentioned the UP model.
Decent conclusion.
The content is well explained.
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In the 2nd part of the answer, mention the challenges in regional resource-based manufacturing.
Only then your balance will be on the right track.
The 1st part of the answer is decently handled.
But because the discussion on the challenges are missing, hence the structure is off-balance.
Underline important points in the answer.
The content is good.
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What are the issues with developing regional resource-based manufacturing.
Without discussing it, your structure will be incomplete.
The 1st part of the answer needs better linking with employment.
Your direction is right but the linkage is vague. It has to be pinpoint. The 10 points questions should have content that is right on the money.
Underline your key points more frequently.
Good conclusion.
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Good answer overall.
Your balance is right on track.
The content is to the point and well explained.
Make a better and clear diagram. That will help you gain extra marks.
The 2nd part is decently handled. The example of Bhilai etc is good.
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What is regional resource-based manufacturing?
How is regional resource-based manufacturing helping employment? You discussed various elements and benefits of it but did not link it with the employment which is the main demand of the question.
What are the issues with regional resource-based manufacturing?
You have to discuss these angles because they are the main demands of the question.
Good conclusion.
Also in 10 marks questions, the content should be short. USe only 3-4 good bullet points in each subheading
India is a highly Demogarphically dividend country In the world. Growing Population ,Regional Imabalance, widening gap Between Poor and rich it’s Hampering Economy as well as Society through out the Country.
Regional resource Based Manufacturing- Developing industry from. Locally Available Resources.
Former Prime Minister J.Nehru said .” industry are the Modern Temple of India.
– It Will Definitely help In Overall Development Of The particular Region by Generating Employment.
– Economy – Money Circulation- Demand / Suppply-Standard of Living improved- Health – Education and ultimately Nation Building.
-It will address the Major of Unemployed Youth of India of Employment and Sustainability.
– Following Govt Intiatives Address The question
1.Make In india
2.Skill India
3.Startup and Stand Up india
4.Atal Innovation
5.Baharatmala and Sagaramala.
Thus Issue Of regional Resources Based Manufacturing and Employment Need To Resolve As early as Earlist ,with Keeping Pace with World .