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- In the intro, briefly mention the issues of the recent changes noticed in the Arctic region due to climate change.
- In the body mention the impacts such as warming of the Arctic at a rate twice the global rate, reduction in the ice there, impact on the marine animals there, increasing ocean acidification due to feedback loop etc.
- Conclude by highlighting the need for global action on climate change.
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Hi PS
Read the question again, first explain how and why climate change has now become a major topic of concern especially amid the crisis going on for now.
Then write about the Arctic region.
You have explained the impact on region region in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Good points in way forward.
Overall a decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, be consistent and keep writing.
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Hi Deepika
Read the question again, first explain how and why climate change has now become a major topic of concern especially amid the crisis going on for now.
Then write about the Arctic region.
Use of diagram is appreciable.
Good points in the impact part but add this also- Warming in the Arctic is leading to the thawing of once permanently frozen permafrost below ground.This is alarming scientists because as permafrost thaws, carbon dioxide and methane previously locked up below ground is released.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Mehul
Rephrase your introduction.
First write the causes of warming of the Arctic region then write the impacts of it.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Instead of writing bullet points, explain them in one or two lines.
Write about the thawing of permafrost.
Way forward is good.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by highlighting the need for global action on climate change.
Underline keywords .
Try to write in straight lines.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Write short introduction.
First write the causes of warming of the Arctic region then write the impacts of it.
You can write in causes that accumulation of black carbon on surface, feedback loop mechanism etc.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Write about the thawing of the permafrost also.
Good conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work on sentence formation.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
First write the causes of warming of the Arctic region then write the impacts of it.
You can write in causes that accumulation of black carbon on surface, feedback loop mechanism etc.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
You have explained the impacts in a decent manner.
Way forward and conclusion a re decently explained.
Work on handwriting, make your ‘s’ properly.
Keep working hard !