Mentor’s comment-
- In the intro, you can mention that pandemic and disruption experienced in its wake has posed an unprecedented challenge to the governance.
- In the body, you can highlight the issues related to various aspect of the governance such as health, economic, law and order which has been facing challenges. Then you can mention that these problems are at various levels national, state and local level. The success of Kerala government in containing the pandemic successfully has been attributed to state-local level coordination. You can cite this as an example. Then suggest the measure to be adopted to deal with these issues.
- Conclude by stressing the need to root out these issues to tackle any crisis in the future successfully.
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Deepika introduction should be catchy,rewrite introduction
there are so many grammatical mistakes in your answer,work on basic grammar
good discussion in the main body
avoid cutting of words in the answer sheet
the content is rich and well placed
overall good attempt,keep it up
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Teja you need to rephrase your introduction,there are grammatical errors.
you have covered less aspects relating to challenges,need o diversify your answer
improve spellings , and do not do basic mistakes like non-corporation
conclusion is missing,do not end answer without concluding remarks
adhere to proper structure of the answer
underline keywords to convince examiner easily
keep practicing ,you will improve
Please review the answer.
HI Dakshina
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lackluster introduction,mention briefly how pandemic situation has posed an unprecedented challenge to the governance.
Good use of flow chart.
Avoid using capital alphabets in between of a sentence (except for nouns).
Well structured answer.
In conclusion,also mention why there is a need for these governance reforms.
Persistency is the key to success,keep writing
Parth sir, order no. is #0000233081. Please check other answers also.
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please review ID #191476.
HI Aastha
Your intro lacks the necessary depth.there is also a need to rephrase it.
Mention briefly how the pandemic situation posed different challenges for governance.
You have discussed the body in a good manner,keep it up .
Conclusion is missing,
Conclude by stressing the need and ways to tackle any crisis in the future successfully.
Work on basic grammar
Keep writing,you will improve.
Sir, marks?
Marks-4
I have paid for the course but not getting option to attach file. Can anyone guide me?
Parakh you can attach your file with the help of attachment link given in the right side of the comment box.
Hi Parth. I am not getting attachment option besides comment box.
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Is it an issue of browser?
Parakh you can change the browser and see if it is working or not.
No its not working in explorer also. I saw in AWE’s comment section, seems like people have faced this issue earlier also
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@Parth Verma: Sir please review
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