Mentor’s comment-
- Briefly explain the expansion of modern education system in the British times.
- In the body critically analyse the development of modern education.
- Conclude with significance of it to Indian system.
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Mentor’s comment-
Kindly review it
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Hi Divya
Good intro.
Motives are discussed in a good manner, try giving subheadings for better presentation.
Content wise good attempt, need to work more on presentation.
Write in straight lines.
Good structure.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
@Parth
Please review
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Hi Deepika
Good intro.
Motives and impact are discussed in a decent manner,.
Good conclusion.
Try giving subheadings.
Good structure.
A good attempt, keep working hard.