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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/getting-the- firewall-ready-cyber-audits- critical-for-government-to- begin-with/2015355/ - https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/why-india-needs- an-updated-cybersecurity- strategy/2001658/ - In the intro, briefly mention the importance of cybersecurity.
- In the body, a multi-pronged approach to cybersecurity strategies like the adoption standards and guidelines, advisory mechanism, conducting security checks, security audits, creation of cyber defence network etc can be mentioned.
- Conclude by the salience of a robust cybersecurity environment and potential harm its disruption could do to a country.
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Hi Taran
Involvement of citizens ,government and business in what ? Rephrase your introduction.
Before suggesting the steps, write about the issues in cyber security, then write why there is a need of cyber security framework.
Try to write a structured answer.
In way forward you can write that we can bring cyber security in education,government of India may consider including cyber security architecture in its Make In India programme etc.
Need to work upon content,enrich it and diversify it.
Brainstorm before writing.
Avoid spelling mistakes and work on basic grammar.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Good points in challenges part,you can add this also India lacks indigenisation in hardware as well as software cyber security tools.This makes India’s cyberspace vulnerable to cyber attacks motivated by state and non-state actors.
Suggested strategy is well diverse,keep it up.
Add some other aspect also like need to create awareness, bringing cyber security in education,security audit etc.
Conclusion is good.
Content is well placed.
A decent attempt, keep it up !
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Hi Shubham
Avoid such long sentences in the introduction.
Use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better manner.
Before suggesting the steps, explain the issues like lack of cyber security workforce,no unified line of command,lack of active cyber defence and awareness etc.
Follow a proper structure.
Suggested strategy is good.
Avoid using short forms in your answer.
Do not use unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Work on content.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Amandeep
First thing improve your handwriting, avoid scribbling and write neat and legible.
Good introduction.
You have explained the challenges in a decent manner,but suggested strategy or way forward needs more points .
You can write that there is a need to create awareness, bringing cyber security in education,need to strengthen the existing cyber security framework etc.
Try to cover different aspects to fetch better marks.
Always end with some concluding remarks.
You can conclude writing about the significance of robust cyber security framework for the country.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Along with necessity of cyber security, write the challenges also. Then suggest the way forward.
In challenges part,you can write that there is a lack of cyber security workforce,no unified line of command,lack of active cyber defence and awareness etc.
Follow a proper structure to get good marks,
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Use proper subheadings,like you wrote hospitals are still using window xp, give a subheading ‘need to update softwares’ . It will make your answer better projected.
Content in the strategy part is good enough.
Work on handwriting.
Overall a good try !
Keep writing.
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Hi NJ
Good introduction.
You have explained the challenges in a diverse manner,keep it up !
Suggested strategy is wonderful.
Giving you some more points like promoting indigenisation, bringing cyber security in education etc.
Content is good,diverse and well placed !
Overall a decent attempt.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
You have managed the space in a decent manner,keep it up.
Answer is well structured .
Need to use proper subheadings for better presentation.
Content is diverse.
Good concluding remarks.
Work on handwriting.
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Keep working hard !
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
You have explained the need of a sound cyber security framework in a decent manner.
Challenges and the measures are well explained.
The content is good and well placed.
God conclusion.
Need to work upon handwriting, write neat and legible.
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Hi Teja
Lackluster introduction, briefly mention the importance of cyber security.
You have explained the issues in a decent manner.
Suggested strategy is well diverse,keep it up.
Add some other aspect also like need to create awareness, bringing cyber security in education,security audit etc.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Avoid cutting.
Underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
Keep writing, you will succeed.